Members hammergjh Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs Keep in mind I'm just writing this on the fly, stream of consciousness stuff, no editing, no notes, no outline. I will make it better later when I switch my editor in. Right now I'm just getting it all out while it's flowing.Thanks for reading. Terry D. You're doing a damn fine job here, Terry. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members digwhisper Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 More please, I enjoy your writing and your story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deny Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 I'm just posting to turn e-mail notification on for this thread. Damn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members atc3434 Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 Terry, if I get the time (college, its just a matter of not doing enough of the stuff you're supposed to, right?) I'm going to compile all these stories, these deserve to be archived. I've been a silent follower in the stories in the PA forum from a WHILE ago, and now this. You really are a gifted writer.. that bit about a beautiful girl and her following, her being the sun, etc etc.... pretty freak'n good. Story just keeps getting better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WonderMalcolm Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 I nominate Knobsy for the Forumite of the Month Award. He's done more to lighten the mood of my month than anyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members planetal Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 Terry,This is the most weirdly fascinating and addictive thing I've ever had the pleasure to read on here. Your writing skills are clearly abundant as well.Thanks Al Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members PBBPaul Posted September 8, 2005 Members Share Posted September 8, 2005 This certainly is an addictive story, please continue. I like your writing style as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members IsildursBane Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs I think I might actually be older than Mixerman, if that's even possible. Have you read any of Aardvark's "Depths of My Stupidity" saga? It makes Mixerman's Diaries look like something you'd get from a freshman composition major. They're in Mixerman's forums, but the first ones might not be up anymore.-Dan. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ctardi Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 I have copied everything into microsoft word so far, 15 pages of size 10 font. If it's alright with terry, I wouldn't mind editing it, maybe do something, not sure what, with it....Can you let me know if it's alright that I edit it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WonderMalcolm Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by ctardi I have copied everything into microsoft word so far, 15 pages of size 10 font. If it's alright with terry, I wouldn't mind editing it, maybe do something, not sure what, with it....Can you let me know if it's alright that I edit it? 15 pages? Of this one story? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 9, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by ctardi I have copied everything into microsoft word so far, 15 pages of size 10 font. If it's alright with terry, I wouldn't mind editing it, maybe do something, not sure what, with it....Can you let me know if it's alright that I edit it? Please don't, it's still a work in progress.You might notice I've been gradually editing the whole thing back to the first chapter.Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members godhacks Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Got me wanting more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bajazz Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 OK, if you can't beat them.....I had a gig and when I packed up my stuff a girl that looked just like Angelina Jolie commented "nice ass!" everytime I bent down to pick up something. We shared a beer, and for once sake a girl bothered to stick around 'till I was finished packing up. Then we went home on a after party with my cousin.......more to come... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bajazz Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 We drank some more and sang and played and smoked and THEN WE {censored}ED FOR HOURS, FOR GODS SAKE! YES!EndAhhh, what a relief!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Forbidden Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by godhacks Got me wanting more. +1I read most of it last night and the rest today, great stuff Terry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members hammergjh Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Lesbian stories are so {censored}ing hot.... Keep me up...I mean, keep up w/ the story, PS! Nice writing btw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ctardi Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs Please don't, it's still a work in progress.You might notice I've been gradually editing the whole thing back to the first chapter.Terry D. I hadn't even noticed...once your done, i do have an idea, so i'll talk to you then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members squealie Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs Part VIII. Dead Man Walking - "Red" Is this the same 'Red' who drove the crew truck and epoxy'd the spark plug? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members atc3434 Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by squealie Is this the same 'Red' who drove the crew truck and epoxy'd the spark plug? Scary thing is I know exactly what story your talking about. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members fuzzball Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 More... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members godhacks Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Go Terry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators justcrash Posted September 9, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 9, 2005 Holy crap Knobs, am I ever happy I've subscribed to this thread! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deny Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 I knew your style was familiar... Mr. Terry D. AKA Dan Brown! So this is where you hang out when you want to chill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members atc3434 Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Terry, you never cease to amaze. I've been getting crazy looks all week from my roomate when at any given time (3am) I'll bust out laughing or drop a loud "WHAT!?" I really do want to see all your stories compiled somewhere, someday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 9, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by squealie Is this the same 'Red' who drove the crew truck and epoxy'd the spark plug? No. "Red" is pretty much what every guy in the music biz with red hair gets called.Unless he's also huge. Then he gets called, "Tiny."Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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