Members Andersonology Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Wow....you got me to stay past 5 at my job on a Friday evening...very compelling stuff. You should try and and pitch this as a screenplay to Hollywood.I can't even imagine what the ending is going to be Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TheBeatButcher Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 What a fantastic story (or stories, I should say)!Thanks, Terry!Joe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Angry Grimace Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Eh, better as a "On the Road" type of book lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 9, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by TheBeatButcher What a fantastic story (or stories, I should say)!Thanks, Terry!Joe All the stories and characters come together in the end, I'm just having a little trouble getting there because the side stories are so interesting, at least to me.Then again, I lived them.Thanks for the support.Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members David Simpson Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs All the stories and characters come together in the end, I'm just having a little trouble getting there because the side stories are so interesting, at least to me.Then again, I lived them.Thanks for the support.Terry D. You are doing great.....dont leave anything out!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members facefirst Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Type faster!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 9, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by facefirst Type faster!!!! It's not the typing that's the problem. Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members facefirst Posted September 9, 2005 Members Share Posted September 9, 2005 Originally posted by MrKnobs It's not the typing that's the problem. Terry D. Remember faster then!!!!DAMN YOU!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members IbanezShred Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 This story is great man...You don't have to write fiction for it to be interesting...I am nobody to judge but you could probably write a good noval. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members facefirst Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by IbanezShred This story is great man...You don't have to write fiction for it to be interesting...I am nobody to judge but you could probably write a good noval. and even a better novel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dissonance Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 I swear I've read that Sandy/Candy story before. Have you written about it before because I'm sure I've heard it. The part about Janis sounded a little familiar too but not enough to say I'm sure I've heard it before like the Sandy/Candy part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members riffy Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Fabulous story Terry D.!Your writing skills are way up there with me as well. Your storytelling reminds me very much of my younger days whenI would read Micky Spillane novels.Thanks for the continuing enjoyable read.Gary Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members fuzzball Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Still waiting for the next part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WonderMalcolm Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by dissonance I swear I've read that Sandy/Candy story before. Have you written about it before because I'm sure I've heard it. The part about Janis sounded a little familiar too but not enough to say I'm sure I've heard it before like the Sandy/Candy part. The Sandy/Candy bit has been posted before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dissonance Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by WonderMalcolm The Sandy/Candy bit has been posted before. Ok thanks then I'm not crazy. Regardless of whether these stories are true, they sure are well written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dead matt Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Your captivated audience awaits.......... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Rusty G. Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 I'm blown away. This is real good stuff. . .How about a novel where, no, make that a screenplay where some guy on the internet is telling the other guys on the internet something about this story. . .and we're all part of it. But the thing is, the story is real. Is it a horror story or erotic novel? . . .Whatever it is, Terry, you've got some real chops. I don't know if you played the guitar as well as you write, but you're missing out on your calling in life if you're spending more time working on computers instead of working with them in capturing your creative thoughts! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MitchSchaft Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 I was hoping for one more before bed . Thanks for sharing, dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Shark Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 You got me hooked.Great Job Bro.Keep it cumin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 10, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by dissonance I swear I've read that Sandy/Candy story before. Have you written about it before because I'm sure I've heard it. Yes, it's posted over in the Stupid Stories thread on the Live Sound forum. It's part of the puzzle that fits into this, and I had told it as a short story previously.I wonder if anyone has figured out what the unifying theme of the story is, aside from "groupies," of course. Feel free to guess the ending. In any case I will write what actually happened as I've stayed true to reality so far. Terry D.P.S. Thanks to all for the kind words. I'm not so much trying to impress or entertain as I am to purge myself of these secrets. I literally shook for about 30 minutes after I wrote the last chapter above. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members glogulus Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 MrKnobs, great writing, whether your story is true or not I'm hooked.You know, you really are a good writer. You should write a memoir ebook or something . I'd buy it.But since this is free, next episode please . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Rockys Mob Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 what do you call this story, MrKnobs? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members atc3434 Posted September 10, 2005 Members Share Posted September 10, 2005 Terry, I recall a story about a bolt action rifle, and a sucide attempt... part of this story? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 10, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by Rockys Mob what do you call this story, MrKnobs? I haven't decided, I have a couple of ideas. The best title I've come up with so far, which is the point of the piece, is too revealing of the ending, which was a surprise in real life and should be here as well.I'm literally writing this just as it flows from memory, no outline, no plan. I've had to go back and do some slight edits in the earlier chapters for continuity. I actually hadn't planned to write more than the first segment. It's important to think of this as a first draft, because that's what it is.Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators MrKnobs Posted September 10, 2005 Moderators Share Posted September 10, 2005 Originally posted by atc3434 Terry, I recall a story about a bolt action rifle, and a sucide attempt... part of this story? No, that might still be posted over in Live Sound / Stupid Stories. She was actually the next girlfriend I had after Gail in this story. You might be surprised to know I have nothing against either girl and still have fond memories of them to this day. They were both good women, each in their own way, I just wasn't ready for a good woman at that point in my life.Terry D. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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