Members rhancox Posted May 16, 2010 Members Share Posted May 16, 2010 The harmonies really make the song complete. I heard a little percussion but at first I thought it was just your hand hitting the guitar while you strummed. I didn't really notice any bass. No matter, the addition of the harmonies was the topper. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members C70man Posted May 16, 2010 Members Share Posted May 16, 2010 Wow, you found a new niche....excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members masterbuilt Posted May 17, 2010 Members Share Posted May 17, 2010 The harmonies really make the song complete. I heard a little percussion but at first I thought it was just your hand hitting the guitar while you strummed. I didn't really notice any bass. No matter, the addition of the harmonies was the topper.Nice job. The bass is nice and clear on a CD I burned. It is plenty audible on the USB connected speakers that I plugged into my laptop. They are made by Cyber Acoustics and actually what I use when I am initially mixing on the laptop. I listen to the completed mix on my Roland reference monitors to make sure everything is okay at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members guitarist21 Posted May 17, 2010 Members Share Posted May 17, 2010 I might have to follow Ellen's advice and give this one away to someone who can sing it. Some of the lyrics maybe could use a little tweeking, but I think it mostly needs a good singer to pull it off. And a good band to play it. I'm just a hack songwriter wannabe I did not mean to imply that by giving it to a different singer you were not able to sing it! In my experience, having someone other than yourself sing something you wrote can help a song realize it's full potential. Especially when it's already a good song, like yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TSMusic Posted May 22, 2010 Members Share Posted May 22, 2010 Just a quick note here. I was away for most of last week and I finally got done listening to this month's VOM. Great job as always guys and thanks to all who listened to my submission and commented. It is a tough piece to play, I've done it better and believe me, I have done it worse. But it was a one shot take so... How many weeks till the next one??? Tony Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members chriscarnucci Posted May 22, 2010 Members Share Posted May 22, 2010 I did not mean to imply that by giving it to a different singer you were not able to sing it! In my experience, having someone other than yourself sing something you wrote can help a song realize it's full potential. Especially when it's already a good song, like yours.Oh I know Ellen, it is I who insist I can't sing it! I knew it the whole time I was singing it! But still I sing it! Because it's there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members g6120 Posted May 25, 2010 Members Share Posted May 25, 2010 Pine Apple Slim - Great take on this 60's anti-war classic!Tbryson - Great road trip song!BlackHatHunter - Great take on a great song!! Liked the photo montage you put together too.Garthman - Sounded great! Like the way you play and sing this!Rhancox - Clan recording and your singing is spot on!! Great playing and singing.Fendouglas - What a fun song! Great delivery too!!chriscarnucci - Beautiful song Chris!! Vocal started rough but seemed to smooth out as you went.FussenKuh - Awesome!! You had me rockin'!Michael_Martin - Very Nice!! What struck me most was the vocal phrasing and delivery. Great lyrics!Stackabones - You have a great signature style which is truly wonderful to listen to! Grat song!!Diceman1000 - Love this. Great song with a great story.Frets99 - Beautiful rendition and clever video to go with it!Bludog79 - Sounds great!!Sangemon - I like your rendition!! If your vocal was stronger it would have a John Prine sound!Hypcollector - Really great song!!Guitarist21 - Awesome!! Loved that ending solo too!RKO - I've never heard that song, nice one!!LiFeStArTsAt40 - One of my old favorites I learned as a teen! You definitely got the feel. Nice recording too!TSMusic - Wow! Sounds like multiple guitars! Great!!Oldskool Texas - Great song with some great advice for the kids!!Masterbuilt - Great song and I like your voice!Phoniclab - Really like your take on this! One of my AB favs!!Mrmoe - Always enjoy your songs and this one is no exception!!Glenn_F - Great song and thoroughly enjoyable listen!Gthom - Not the sort of music I normally listen to but I appreciate the dedication it takes to be able to play this!Jamesp - After I cranked it up and could hear it I really enjoyed the lisyen!Brianwahl - Listened to this on the forum, Great!!Pschaafs - A Classic! Buffalo Springfield is one of my favorite bands from back then. Great take on this!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BlackHatHunter Posted May 25, 2010 Members Share Posted May 25, 2010 Thanks g6120 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members masterbuilt Posted May 25, 2010 Members Share Posted May 25, 2010 Thanks Gil. BTW Your playing style reminds me of Jimmy Charron. Jimmy died a few years ago, but, he was a fantastic fly fisherman, guitarist, and athlete (pro baseball in his early days). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members FussenKuh Posted May 25, 2010 Members Share Posted May 25, 2010 Thanks Gil! Your feedback is much appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LiFeStArTs@40 Posted May 26, 2010 Members Share Posted May 26, 2010 Thank you Gil... much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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