Members dedpool1052 Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 how about a thread where people post song lyrics or poems they have written? i'll start with a few of mine ----------------------------------------winter snow turned to spring's first bloom,then summer turned to autmn's gloom.our treasured years are long gone,passed by so quick like dusk to dawn.when we were young and full of cheer,our hope did dwindle year by year.some may say we were running blind,somehow the world left us behind.--------------------------------a thousand different excuses,every one of them would be useless.things aint the way they use to be,things have changed between you and me.i use to feel so close to you,i thought that you felt the same too.the times that i was not there,it's not that i did not care.there was nothing that i could do,obligations kept me from you.now i feel we've grown apart,divided like a broken heart.--------------------------------you can only break a heart,until it falls apart.and all that's left is dust,and there's no one left to trust.no longer feel the love,from the god above.no longer do i care,there's no heart left to tear.there's nothing left of me,as far as i can see.nothing left for you to break,nothing left for you to take.-------------------------------trying my best to cope,and looking for a shred of hope.praying for a ray of light,to let me know that it's alright.will you help silence these cries,and wipe the tears from my eyes.help me numb the pain inside,stay until the pain subsides.please help heal this broken soul,mend this heart and make it whole.make me better than i am,make me feel i'm worth a damn. btw, im usually very selective about who i show my poems to, but im just drunk enough to post'em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sunburstbasser Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 My lyrics that I love most involve a cyclops who lives in a cave and eats people. Sung in the style of Johnny Cash. I'll have to dig those up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Sonic1 Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 how about a thread where people post song lyrics or poems they have written?i'll start with a few of mine----------------------------------------winter snow turned to spring's first bloom,then summer turned to autmn's gloom.our treasured years are long gone,passed by so quick like dusk to dawn.when we were young and full of cheer,our hope did dwindle year by year.some may say we were running blind,somehow the world left us behind.--------------------------------a thousand different excuses,every one of them would be useless.things aint the way they use to be,things have changed between you and me.i use to feel so close to you,i thought that you felt the same too.the times that i was not there,it's not that i did not care.there was nothing that i could do,obligations kept me from you.now i feel we've grown apart,divided like a broken heart.--------------------------------you can only break a heart,until it falls apart.and all that's left is dust,and there's no one left to trust.no longer feel the love,from the god above.no longer do i care,there's no heart left to tear.there's nothing left of me,as far as i can see.nothing left for you to break,nothing left for you to take.-------------------------------trying my best to cope,and looking for a shred of hope.praying for a ray of light,to let me know that it's alright.will you help silence these cries,and wipe the tears from my eyes.help me numb the pain inside,stay until the pain subsides.please help heal this broken soul,mend this heart and make it whole.make me better than i am,make me feel i'm worth a damn.btw, im usually very selective about who i show my poems to, but im just drunk enough to post'em. That's remarkably simular to a song a wrote called "September's Child". I'll have to find it and post... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members FreestyleIntruder Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 I would, but they're quite personal and I don't feel comfortable baring my soul to someone I'm not trying to sleep with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members B-Bottom Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 This one is from my band 1000 EARTH YEARS www.myspace.com/1000earthyears Psalms in A Lying in Wait Sic Semper Tyranus lies in state Black coal steam Draped Casket over 6 foot 3 (chorus) what kind of monsters have we made stitched out of dead men all homemade Bearded Doorman Reads the book and gives the stamp Exempt from the list Scolding lakes of brimestone mist At any rate 4th dimension time and space I declare Pay no attention to the man back there (chorus) What kind of monsters have we made Stitched out of dead men all homemade Statler and Waldorf critiquing moves It's like torture having to always prove Get up and get down this is your shot In no time the other shoe will drop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members absintheXIII Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 I would, but they're quite personal and I don't feel comfortable baring my soul to someone I'm not trying to sleep with. This. Plus I generally suck at most things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members lug Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 I hear that bass line comin'It's chuggin' round the bendAnd I ain't been on beat since I don't know when,I'm stuck in the HC Bass Forum, and time keeps draggin' onBut that bass line keeps a rollin', southeast of San Antone..When I was just a baby my mama told me. Son,Always be a good boy, don't ever play the bass.But I gigged with a man in Reno just to watch him dieWhen I hear that bass solo, I hang my head and cry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dedpool1052 Posted November 17, 2009 Author Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 That's remarkably simular to a song a wrote called "September's Child". I'll have to find it and post... which one? i wrote all but one of those about 2 years ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Sonic1 Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 which one? i wrote all but one of those about 2 years ago. The first one. On second glance, your's has a little different meaning. My wife put a bunch of stuff in storage including my note pads. I'll try to find it again later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bnyswonger Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 I'm too lazy to type any out, but I'll look around the netz for some to cut and paste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bnyswonger Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 Ok - here are a couple Veneer The great ape arrived in a shiny red humveeHe said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dert_stylus Posted November 17, 2009 Members Share Posted November 17, 2009 :thu:I love writing poetry or as I like to call the Words, just a word of caution most of my stuff is depressing although I love my life. It's like it is written by Bizzaro me THE LEDGE LIGHTING THIS CANDLE WITH A MATCH AT BOTH ENDSSACRIFICE MY FUTURE16 BULLETSMY BEST FRIENDHATE MY AMBITIONSLET THE TRUTHUNFOLDCAN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dedpool1052 Posted November 18, 2009 Author Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 The first one. On second glance, your's has a little different meaning. that one was kind of inspired by a scene in "clerks 2" when dante and randall were in the car after their go-kart ride and randall said how the go-karts reminded him of a simpler time when the world was still in front of him and how he felt the world left them behind a long time ago. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members slapthefunkyfour Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 I hear that bass line comin' It's chuggin' round the bend And I ain't been on beat since I don't know when, I'm stuck in the HC Bass Forum, and time keeps draggin' on But that bass line keeps a rollin', southeast of San Antone.. When I was just a baby my mama told me. Son, Always be a good boy, don't ever play the bass. But I gigged with a man in Reno just to watch him die When I hear that bass solo, I hang my head and cry.. Winner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mrs. bleepo Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 This. Plus I generally suck at most things. i doubt you do, but i feel the same way. i wrote a ton when i was "in a band" but i think i hate all of it. meh (and a ton means like 6) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bnyswonger Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 Here's one that might appeal to the artistic bent of HCBF - Copy Machine Come on, Angeline, you're the woman of my dreams(sit on my copy machine)and my life would be complete if you'll only have a seat(on my copy machine) There's a wild storm brewin' and it will not passI got to have a photocopy of your sweet little asscome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine I'm down on bended knees, I beg you baby, please(sit on my copy machine)and I won't think you're a slut if you replicate your butt(on my copy machine) Now don't you think that I'm perverted or a low-life scumI only want to find out where you're comin' fromcome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine Sit down, sit down, sit down, sit down, sit down Come on, Angeline, you're the woman of my dreams(sit on my copy machine)and my heart would be serene if you'll only make the scene(on my copy machine) You're the only woman who can turn me into a foolyou're the undisputed queen of the typing poolcome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dedpool1052 Posted November 18, 2009 Author Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 i doubt you do, but i feel the same way. i wrote a ton when i was "in a band" but i think i hate all of it. meh(and a ton means like 6) share'em, please.i use to think the same way until i actually showed my stuff so some people and they all said it was good. i still dont think im great by any means, but i also think that im not too bad either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dedpool1052 Posted November 18, 2009 Author Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 Here's one that might appeal to the artistic bent of HCBF -Copy Machine Come on, Angeline, you're the woman of my dreams(sit on my copy machine)and my life would be complete if you'll only have a seat(on my copy machine)There's a wild storm brewin' and it will not passI got to have a photocopy of your sweet little asscome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine I'm down on bended knees, I beg you baby, please(sit on my copy machine)and I won't think you're a slut if you replicate your butt(on my copy machine)Now don't you think that I'm perverted or a low-life scumI only want to find out where you're comin' fromcome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine Sit down, sit down, sit down, sit down, sit downCome on, Angeline, you're the woman of my dreams(sit on my copy machine)and my heart would be serene if you'll only make the scene(on my copy machine)You're the only woman who can turn me into a foolyou're the undisputed queen of the typing poolcome on, Angeline, sit on my copy machine this made me lol. i like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members bnyswonger Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 this made me lol. i like it. It's just a dum dum rock tune, but people do like it & request it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mrs. bleepo Posted November 18, 2009 Members Share Posted November 18, 2009 share'em, please. i use to think the same way until i actually showed my stuff so some people and they all said it was good. i still dont think im great by any means, but i also think that im not too bad either. maybe once i am done copying all the files from before the harddrive wipe back onto the computer. but probably not the only one that i tried getting into a real song was the one for my dad. maybe i will share that one as people have seen it and didn't push me down the stairs out of the jam space! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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