Members mparsons Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=442291&songID=7750177 What do you think... Where should I work on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members CocoTone Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Lucius Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 Your arps are good. The rythm playing is awesome. I dig the first part of the solo @ :10-19 but your vibrato feels fake, and some of your faster runs sound a bit dated( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members YngwieReid Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 Chord progressions & alt. voicings, Timing ( as Gilbert says locking into a groove ), Vibrato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TornadoOfSouls Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 I think you're {censored}ing awesome. Sometimes it feels like you're slowing it down for too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members NixerX Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 Very good playing. Good melodic ideas. Some timing issues and a little intonation issues on the wider vibrato. great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members VTM Mike Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 Very good playing. Good melodic ideas. Some timing issues and a little intonation issues on the wider vibrato. great work! This. The arps were cool, sounded like you are more comfortable playing those than some of the other things you did there. The vibrato sounds a bit stiff. Work on the slow stuff, phrasing, keeping the vibrato smooth and fluid. A bit choppy at times, overall very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mparsons Posted June 24, 2009 Author Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 This. The arps were cool, sounded like you are more comfortable playing those than some of the other things you did there. The vibrato sounds a bit stiff. Work on the slow stuff, phrasing, keeping the vibrato smooth and fluid. A bit choppy at times, overall very good. Yeah, I practiced the arps a lot more than the other stuff, I wanted to make sure it was nice and clean. I'll give the rest of it some more practice too. Thanks for listening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members thefyn Posted June 24, 2009 Members Share Posted June 24, 2009 Playing was cool. Drums ruined it for me. Too jaunty. Get something that flows more. And you need bass to glue it together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mparsons Posted June 26, 2009 Author Members Share Posted June 26, 2009 Playing was cool. Drums ruined it for me. Too jaunty. Get something that flows more. And you need bass to glue it together. The bass is there, its just a bit quiet... Probably should raise it up a bit But its completely unmixed. Upon second listening, I agree with the drums, going to vary up the beat a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members shredbadtone Posted June 26, 2009 Members Share Posted June 26, 2009 it sounds well put together but it sounds like you have played this A LOT. It doesn't feel spontaneous at all ya know? I kinda feel like I already know what you're gonna do next. playing was tight and your sweeps sounded super clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LeftyScum4000 Posted June 26, 2009 Members Share Posted June 26, 2009 Without listening, I'd say 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mparsons Posted June 26, 2009 Author Members Share Posted June 26, 2009 Without listening, I'd say 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members shredbadtone Posted June 26, 2009 Members Share Posted June 26, 2009 Thanks! It is a composed solo.. I've found that my improvised solos are really lame. well there ya go buddy. The thing you need to work on is improvising. I think it makes all the difference when soloing and a lot of the time it adds a lot of character to your playing as it's you thinking on the fly. your composing skills are already pretty solid so if you can add the improve your {censored} will be over the top. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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