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The Day I Lost Myself REVISIT for release


Lee Knight

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Good song and amazing chorus! I like it very much, but it's definitely too short. I suggest you:

 

Now I’m flat on the floor

None of me left

Thinkin’ about round two (only one bar not two)

 

(repeat the same melody)

Now I’m flat on the floor

None of me left

Cause the day I lost myself

I found you

 

But that's only my opinion :)

 

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Good song and amazing chorus! I like it very much, but it's definitely too short. I suggest you:

 

Now I’m flat on the floor

None of me left

Thinkin’ about round two (only one bar not two)

 

(repeat the same melody)

Now I’m flat on the floor

None of me left

Cause the day I lost myself

I found you

 

But that's only my opinion :)

 

That's a great idea! I'll mess with that... thanks.

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