Members The dman Posted January 22, 2009 Members Share Posted January 22, 2009 I've been back in writing mode lately and wanted to post a song I started yesterday to get some comments. The song right now is a live rough recording and I hope to finish the rest of it soon. I haven't written a love type song in quite a while so here goes. I'm hoping it's not too smaltzy Start with Me-work in progress Start With Me Won Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members wwwjd Posted January 23, 2009 Members Share Posted January 23, 2009 i can't get your songs to play there for some reason. probably my issue. i'll check back after a reboot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Elias Graves Posted January 24, 2009 Members Share Posted January 24, 2009 Cool. This one's worth working on. My only suggestion would be to try to replace some of the phrasing with something more unexpected. I like. EG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members The dman Posted January 24, 2009 Author Members Share Posted January 24, 2009 Cool. This one's worth working on. My only suggestion would be to try to replace some of the phrasing with something more unexpected. I like.EG Hey thanks for the comments I worked on the core arrangement today so now I'm going to finish the lyrics http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1078780]Start with Me-V2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Elias Graves Posted January 24, 2009 Members Share Posted January 24, 2009 Start with Me-V2 Keep goin, man. I like the rising "me" toward the end. Nice touch. Wish I could sing like that. Wish I could sing like anything. EG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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