Members Jonny333 Posted September 28, 2010 Members Share Posted September 28, 2010 Hey everyone, Just finished a new song. Hope you enjoy it, but would love some feedback. Thanks, Jonny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted September 28, 2010 Members Share Posted September 28, 2010 I love this my friend Right up my street, im a sucker for acoustic music with electronic drums Nice sound and a nice little vid to match..... some people may find the melody a little repetitive but it works for me just as it is x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jonny333 Posted September 28, 2010 Author Members Share Posted September 28, 2010 Thanks so much man. Really appreciate the kind words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted September 28, 2010 Moderators Share Posted September 28, 2010 Yeah!! Love the sounds behind the oh-oh section. Nice drums. Great guitar sound. Cool song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jonny333 Posted September 28, 2010 Author Members Share Posted September 28, 2010 Thanks very much man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LeonardScaper Posted September 28, 2010 Members Share Posted September 28, 2010 Good song. Good production. Interesting guitar. Nice hat. I don't usually comment on lyrics that are not listed but.........oh, wait....that's not my line. Seriously, though, offerings like this are why I love listening to home grown music. This one is a gem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members SnowAngel Posted September 29, 2010 Members Share Posted September 29, 2010 I loved the video production on both this one and "Out of Blue." (That is more my field) Nice set on both. Good editing as well. And this song is really . . . lovely. I would definitely get it for my i-Tunes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jonny333 Posted September 29, 2010 Author Members Share Posted September 29, 2010 Thanks so much guys! LeonardScaper, the lyrics are in the more info section below the video if you were interested Really appreciate the support. Any constructive criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted September 29, 2010 Moderators Share Posted September 29, 2010 Constructive criticism? Well... I think some of the things this particular tune is lacking is what makes it work too. It's repetitive. But that works with the hypnotic nature your arrangement and the almost raga-trance-like motifs. The lyric's a little indecipherable. But that works for the sames reasons given above. You've really nailed it. I guess if pressed, I might say you could work up the oh-oh section a bit more with vocal doubles, etc. But that works too in a sort of off hand, informal way. Well done. I'd be interested to hear how you do another tune that ties into this style without becoming redundant or too repetitive. Oh... and it does sounds a little like a Snow Patrol song. The melody's a little too close... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted September 30, 2010 Members Share Posted September 30, 2010 I like the guitar line and the way the drum machine comes in an out. Some of the piano doesn't quite fit. Quite good, in an Death Cab for Cutie kind of way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Viktoriah Posted October 1, 2010 Members Share Posted October 1, 2010 I like the song a lot. I just don Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jonny333 Posted October 4, 2010 Author Members Share Posted October 4, 2010 Thanks so much guys! Lee Knight: All points noted and thanks for taking the time to point them out, I actually agree on most points, will work on those! Rsadasiv: Thanks for the feedback, which piano bits did you not like so much? (Also i'm a big death cab fan so glad it has a sense of that!) Viktoriah: Really appreciate it, do you think a regular drum set would suit it better or a different form of rhythm? Any ideas? Really appreciate all the ideas, advice and general comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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