Members TIMP3 Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 but I can not get it out of my head. It is so far removed from anything I have written style wise ever. Usually I write my songs in an alt country/country rock style. This is complete poppy dance mayhem. (lol) I do not know where it came from and you will be able to decipher nothing from the lyrics. I now have a recording device so as soon as I can I will post. But here it is Hey You (It's Friday Night) V1 Hey you...... where you goin? Hey you...... who you knowin? Hey you...... are you holdin? Hey you...... we got you flowin It's Friday nighteverything's just right Hey you! V2 Hey you..... what you sayin? Hey you..... who you payin? Hey you..... are you stayin? Hey you..... cause we ain't playin It's Friday nightEverything all right Hey you! V3 Hey you...... what you doin? Hey you..... are you movin? Hey you..... ain't no foolin? Hey you..... we got you groovin It's Friday nightEverything's just right Hey you! Hands in the air Like we got no cares Hey you! (monster guitar solo) repeat V3 Remember I tried to warn you. The missing line is because I can't remember what I wrote and don't have my notebook with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted May 20, 2011 Moderators Share Posted May 20, 2011 Well hey... this is all going to depend on music that makes a sentiment like "hey you, it's Friday" exciting. Dig in. Have fun. Post when you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Marshal Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 Ain't no foolin' (Actually I'd move "are you movin' " up to the 2nd line and use "ain't no foolin' " for the third line. . . . , I want large sums of money if you become famous from this.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 I'm feeling it. But, like Lee says, if the music ain't right... it'll be a lonely night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TIMP3 Posted May 20, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 Ain't no foolin'(Actually I'd move "are you movin' " up to the 2nd line and use "ain't no foolin' " for the third line. . . . , I want large sums of money if you become famous from this.) That's it or some variant of it. But the rhyme word was foolin. I will take your advice and run with it. So in your head it sounds like a horrible pop radio song as well that every kid under the age of 14 will have to have. making me rich beyond my wildest dreams!!!! (lol) They will probably even make a worse remix version. I'll cut you in. promise!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted May 20, 2011 Moderators Share Posted May 20, 2011 Rulin'Schoolin'Toolin'Refuelin'Retoolin'Gruelin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 For the "uncut" version - yes more drivel! Hey you - who ya texting? Hey you - we should be sexing Hey you - youre MY plaything Hey you - you got me flexing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TIMP3 Posted May 20, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 Well ok. I switched the second and third verse's. I want the "movin ,groovin" verse to be repeated. I think it is damn near perfect now. Not gonna lie , getting a little excited about this one now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Oswlek Posted May 20, 2011 Members Share Posted May 20, 2011 Make it fun to sing along to and you'll have a winner. No one said lyrics need to be pulitzer worthy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BlackBelt Posted May 21, 2011 Members Share Posted May 21, 2011 I'm actually on board with it. Oh, and everything I write is also drivel... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TIMP3 Posted May 23, 2011 Author Members Share Posted May 23, 2011 I'm actually on board with it. Oh, and everything I write is also drivel... Well I should have ended my thread title with .......AGAIN. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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