WinterKisses -What do you think?

All alone in the blistering cold

This came to me so I jotted it down and recorded the idea.

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9856448

What say you?

Feels so emp-ty in this house

Feels like Win-ter in the Fall

I---need you here with me

but you've gone away, yeah...

Win-ter kiss-es are no more

Feels so empty without you here...(this will probably be scrapped)

For maybe this: I Don't know what I should live for...

P.S. It's not your cat that is meowing, lol

The beginning bit could be used in a movie, man! So good! Epic-sounding.

Actually, the whole song could be in a movie...I can hear it, literally!

This is a really nice song...your voice tone sounds really good here too...

Aw thanks, really.

I am surrounded by many talented people in this section

so I'm flattered you'd say that...

Did you hear my cat, lol!!!

He's so funny.

YES, but I didn't realise it was the noise of a cat till I read the bit under your first post. lol.

What's his name?

Friendly bump, maybe you guys just missed it...

What's your cat's name, man!?!? lol

Pinky

Aww, cuteness!! What'd ya think of my Land of the Bearded Tomatos? Silly, no? lol

Yes I can certainly see it in a TV show, one of those moving compilations of clips at the end of, say House, where you see various characters going through this emotion.

Where will it go next?

Surely a house can't seem empty with a cat around

Very nice one! How about adding more stanzas!

Yes, I will definitely do that:thu:

That's a real nice start. Reminds me a bit of something Marc Cohn might do.

Good start - the chord pattern is excellent and your voice wraps nicely around it. Vocal sounds a little like Stevie Winwood but still uniquely you.

Yeah I'd scrap that last line. And get the cat into the bathroom with his/her litter box while recording.

"WinterKisses -What do you think?" Ok, but we'll have to be discrete...

Never heard of Marc Cohn (until now) and

I'm listening and I'm saying to myself...{censored}:facepalm:

I see what you mean.

Thanks for listening man.

You get a special internet for being one of

the select few to do so!!!:phil:

Alright cool man thanks:wave:

Who is stevie winwood lol:facepalm:

Just listened to some of his work.

Very jazzy-esque instrumentals (I'm a man)

his voice is pretty sweet!

Do you listen to his stuff at all?

Does he sing that song: You just roll with it baby?"

Just listened to Valerie...

Horry Shi! The similarities is beginning to scare me:eek:

Wth do I do now!!!???

Dude, why didn't you PM me?

We could've kept this on the Down Lo:cop:

Cat's out of the bag, or plausible deniability:idea:

HaHa - remember I added you have your own signature sound so not to worry. Yes he sings "Roll with t baby". I have a few of his songs on Video.

I love that song.

There's this movie called "Short time" with Dabney Coleman.

It's pretty good and features the song, which is how

I came to know of it.

I heard he's coming out with an album/CD where he plays oboe, clarinet, bassoon, flutes, and contra bassoons? He's calling it, "Winwood on Wood Winds?"

So with all this misdirection did you not

happen to like the song?

It's cool, I'm just curious what you thought.

What are your favorite singer's/groups?

Oh I didn't listen yet :-) I will though. I just enjoy adding color, like Dennis Miller? I like my music better than anything else out there :-D

Your puss made a cameo? I've had to redo takes when my cat wants to serenade. I like this, but it's not a song? It's just a snippet? Snap to in and shape up your snippet.

This is why I came to this forum in the 1st place.

To the few who have listened...I appreciate it very much...

I just don't know how to finish non instrumentals...

(Well even then I didn't finish them all) but at least

I've finished most of those...

When it comes to vocals I have an issue with not

being able to see or feel the next part or where to go.

I've got the experience, but no direction.

Yeah, my cat Pinky.

He's a Red Point Siamese

(Loudest meow in friggin feline history) lol:blah::blah:

He's a White kitty, with baby blues, and red points.

PITA but he's worth it.

He now feels entitled to eat only human food

and won't touch his!

HAHAHA! This is why we have NEVER fed our cats our human food! They don't bother us at dinner time or anything, it's great! And we eat on the couch with them sitting right there at the other end...no problems! It's pretty cool (they're not perfect though. They're naughty in other ways, lol)

One of my childhood cats (the one in particular who is the subject of my song Ich Hab Zwei Katzen), he ate cereal, cheese, toast, etc. He once followed me around and around my bed, trying to get to my cereal, and was so insistent that I got distracted and ended up knocking an entire mug of milk off the nearby table and right into my SNEAKER. Ugh. Needless to say I never wore that shoe again!