Originally posted by coldmetalcore Hey headswitch, i listened to your song.
I appreciate the fact that you used an odd time signature for the song. One criticism i could give that song is the repetitiveness of it. I think it needs to change a lot more throughout. I'm a drummer and i know those drums were sampled but I think they needed to do a little bit more. The guitar playing was all tight, but like i said, i think that rhythem guitar needs to do something different at some points, because it gets very repetitive. The song already has a very defined feel to it, so If i were you, I would try to put some busy guitar work in there and try to give that song some energy.
Thanks for the comments, much appreciated. I know what you mean about the drums, I have thought about tweaking them but I lost the original track...
I think I'll resurrect this project when I have the time and see what I can come up with.
oh and i don't know if this is just a technical error or not, but the song i downloaded doesn't really end, it just kinda stops at 3:27, if that's how the song ends then definetly try to tighten that up.
all in all it's a cool song man, definetly stick with it.
Actually, the song should be 4:46 in lenght... Got to check if it uploaded correctly.
Thanks again for the input.
