Originally posted by alcohol Here's a submission of something I did with my son's band, Moxie Fever. I'm going to remix this so any detailed comments or criticisms are welcome. The guitar effects at the end are a mistake, please ignore those.
Give Me The End
moxiefever.com
Great song!
Here's my notes as I'm listening...
Add some reverb to the snare, turn down that hi-hat just a tad.
Pan the guitars a little more...especially the solo...throw that in the right or left channel.
Around :27, where the vocals double, try using a drip of reverb to set them back in the mix and turn down the backup vocal just a little.
and oh man I love that auto-panned guitar around 1:30...that's so cool! Great job!
I think the whole mix could benefit from a little more ambience.
And as far as the effects at the end go, that would be an excellent opener for the next song in line (i.e. have this song end, and the song right after it start with those effects).
This is a superbly written song. Kudos to you and your son (and his band)!
I will probably critique more later. I've got a client here I've got to record so, I might be on a little later!
~Jared