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First of all I just want to discuss the techniques that I would like to practise. Then you can tell me where I'm losing my way or what's wrong with my voice and approach...

I'm experimenting with singing low notes with a breathy, "softer" tone and adding more compression/brightness as the song ascends in pitch. . 

I struggle with Breathing and I think it's audible but I would love some advice therefor. Lately I've been trying to create a tension in the lateral abdominals up towards the diaphragm.

Here's what I sound like though. Please let me know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. 


Vowels/diction/breathing 
https://voca.ro/nPfi4XzUXAQ

Hallelujah (Song practise)

https://voca.ro/dTsyD7qZ7Cl


https://voca.ro/jQaSaAsWhr0

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First of all I just want to discuss the techniques that I would like to practise. Then you can tell me where I'm losing my way or what's wrong with my voice and approach...

I'm experimenting with singing low notes with a breathy, "softer" tone and adding more compression/brightness as the song ascends in pitch. 

I've also been working on adding the edgy sort of nasal sound to my voice and working vocal fry into my phrases. I don't want the honky/bad nasal just the edgy pharyngeal voice I think. 

I struggle with Breathing and I think it's audible but I would love some advice therefor. Lately I've been trying to create a tension in the lateral abdominals up towards the diaphragm.

Here's what I sound like though. Please let me know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. 


Vowels/diction/breathing 
https://voca.ro/nPfi4XzUXAQ

Hallelujah (Song practise)

https://voca.ro/dTsyD7qZ7Cl


https://voca.ro/jQaSaAsWhr0

Now here I'm really pushing that nasal sound as far as Possibly can.

https://voca.ro/7OQMggOFGyc

Which brings me to an important issue which is I'm struggling to think of someone famous who has the sound I'm looking for. The best I could come up with is Tori Kelly and she's female and I'm male. I love her sound though.

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Can't comment much on that edgy stuff, as I mentioned. :classic_wink:

But I noticed a break between oh and oo when you are doing those scales in the first clip.

It sounds to me as if you are trying to onset the oo too soon before you have shaped your mouth. Then you try to force the onset without having created that resonant space.

Try shaping the lips for the oo a tad earlier (just as the oh is ending), and see if that helps eliminate the break.

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10 hours ago, Crispy boi said:

Hallelujah (Song practise)

https://voca.ro/dTsyD7qZ7Cl

I've been busy lately and haven't been able to get to your post until now. This is very good progress. You're starting attempt full sections of the song as opposed as to a couple of phrases. The main issue I am hearing is just a lack of breath support. It's difficult to tell without seeing you visually, but to me it sounds like your posture isn't letting you sing as efficient as possible, which could be holding you back. Try to maintain an elongated posture in the spine and let the ribcage float without collapsing upon itself. Also, I think during practice its perfectly fine to stop after a tough high note and attempt it again. Sometimes higher notes fall flat simply because the singer hasn't prepared well for the note, either mentally due to lack of visualization or physically because the breath wasn't paced appropriately for the phrase. Another reason why higher notes could be difficult is because the sensation of singing high notes feels very different from lower notes.

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Howdy Davie it's great to hear from you. Thanks a lot for the input and feedback.  

I just listened to Winter. I love the dynamics I think most of all. The way you were able to use pharyngeal vouce to pull you through crescendos is great. It's something I'm only just very vaguely attempting Recently.  I definitely should practise that technique more.

I was indeed singing with poor posture It's amazing you could tell from the recording. 

Ok So I just got done practising. I was focusing on the vowel exercises you gave me they're very enjoyable actually. 

I also improved my posture a lot and brought my spine into alignment. I hope the changes are audible and are helping with my breathing. I still think I'm also breathing in awkward places in the phrase as well as inhaling with a lot of tension like i just recovered from a near drowning or something. I need to relax.

Vowels with Stricter posture.

https://voca.ro/a9wmhaZDb1D

https://voca.ro/7zWtMCdMQ2K

Same posture for song practise.

https://voca.ro/6QOYAiDC6nR

Cut tempo down

https://voca.ro/3yudvs4blqO

 

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3 hours ago, Crispy boi said:

I just listened to Winter. I love the dynamics I think most of all. The way you were able to use pharyngeal vouce to pull you through crescendos is great. It's something I'm only just very vaguely attempting Recently.  I definitely should practise that technique more.

Thanks CB. I appreciate your comments. It was a fairly tough song to sing simply because of the dramatic differences in dynamics and colour I had to use throughout the song. 

 

3 hours ago, Crispy boi said:

Same posture for song practise.

https://voca.ro/6QOYAiDC6nR

This is good. Making a slight adjustment made a big difference. Your voice sounds more open. Once the breath flow is no longer restricted by inefficient posture then you can begin to control and manage the air better. Eventually the breath will become more steady over time and singing will become a lot easier.

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Howdy do.

I was working on my breathing/tension issues... patience is key as always 🙂

Tone wise I decided to focus on the way I sing low notes (G2 and up). 

Vowels

https://voca.ro/il3cl1jbXy4

Scales

https://voca.ro/kTi78SeAf2a

Song practise (Happy birthday)

https://voca.ro/o9SJhjzXFZ1

https://voca.ro/aHlyqGHlKDL

My abs were absolutely smoked after this Embarrassingly enough. Playing around with different breath support mechanisms. 

Lemme know what's up with my sound My fellow songbirds and be well. Peace.

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Another practise session done and dusted here's what I'm sounding like. 

Bb scale

https://voca.ro/IfIZq5jFt0G

Tuning 5ths

https://voca.ro/kC9Tvwwk3Eo

Tuning minor 3rds

https://voca.ro/awf9qBsUsEW

Had to move the mic further from my mouth no choice here so sorry for the volume drop.

Pentatonic scale

https://voca.ro/joQae6gCNS2

I heard some nasality issues so I tried to correct it and create more space in the mouth.

https://voca.ro/7LxbNAndH9C

Any advice would greatly help Thanks a lot.

 

 

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On 2/22/2020 at 8:19 AM, Crispy boi said:

My abs were absolutely smoked after this Embarrassingly enough. Playing around with different breath support mechanisms

That's usually a good sign. When things are going right, the body should tire before the throat does. As breath control improves, the pressure on the throat and vocal cords becomes less, which protects the throat and as a result will increase vocal stamina. The abs aren't the only important muscle group involved, I find that the back rib cage muscles (intercostal) are just as important, which are used to hold back the breath pressure.

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Hello Singers. I Just wanted to celebrate 6 months of voice training. I'm not good yet but I've made progress and I just wanted to share it.

As far as pitch when I started I couldn't even match pitch with the piano.

This is what I sounded like when I started learning voice. Brace yourselves. 

https://old.vocaroo.com/i/s1pn1TGDul1n

This is what I sound like now. I know it's not much but it's something.

5 tone scales

https://voca.ro/oEmzjGBKd16

Pushing my range
https://voca.ro/2xBCU3A28No

Song practise


https://voca.ro/aW8cA5Q9nrX

https://voca.ro/8s9Ruc1gNQ6

https://voca.ro/kBfuMuFWR5f

https://voca.ro/oSFdYZoMC1r

Any Comments and advice would be great, Thank you.

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Thanks Davie for educating me on that holistic approach to breath support. It's really helping and I'm getting a good abs workout lol.

Howdy. Here's what today's practise session sounded like. Listening back I can tell I'm distorting my ooh vowel a quite a bit. That's why I took a moment to focus on it.  and and I'm also spreading/straining my eee as well. Any other advice gang? Thanks. I deliberately opened my mouth more as the key went up as well whereas I was going for a more nasal placement on the lower notes. Tell me what you think:) 

Vowels
https://voca.ro/b0JyUmT69wU


Not much thought process here I just sort of went for it. The only thing is I was going for a slight crescendo at the top. 

Arpeggios
https://voca.ro/l2M3O0yt7VU
 

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This practice session i was really focused on my support and fixing my stubborn ooh vowel. I also started new repertoire- ""You raise me up" so forgive me for not knowing the melody off by heart yet.

Vowels

https://voca.ro/nS7BU1OQBUj

More vowels

https://voca.ro/a38nveARPyr

5ths

https://voca.ro/a38nveARPyr

Song practise

https://voca.ro/3MOTLKTb2YR

I could feel myself getting frustrated because I was struggling to support the way I wanted to. 

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Working on vowel integrity mainly. I also noticed I was singing from my throat which I wasn't happy about. My throat was sore when I done and my entire abdomen was exhausted. This has never happened before in my throat.

Arpeggios
https://voca.ro/9QowLVVCj60

https://voca.ro/41KZAagW8SX


La
https://voca.ro/knCdht5AqlR

Ohh
https://voca.ro/kSZTxQsZzjc

Song practice

https://voca.ro/04VWxZK42Wd

https://voca.ro/8CV81NScOLT

https://voca.ro/eOdzhR6L051

Please advise me how I could Keep my voice in my  frontal/ buccal area rather than my throat... Thanks.

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I think I may have a potential solution to yesterdays issues. An unwillingness to open my mouth and actually use my chest voice. So i tried to address thistoday after listening to josh groban singing You raise me up.

Please let me know what you think of my chest voice. I'm working on vowels. The ee and the oo came out not so chesty and my ah was hella breathy for my liking but let me know what you hear. Thanks.

https://voca.ro/2pMKuzj0nH4

https://voca.ro/luqcFNXefWE

Also as i was trying to see how high i could take chest I felt like I hit a wall at E4. It felt a little uncomfortable. I'm not sure how to proceed from there. 

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Please let me know If I'm getting good vocal cord closure. I'm sorry for the noise In the recording i don't know if that's coz I'm so loud or something else. I need to work on my cord closure. Just for reference I was  inside parked car across the street from my landlord and I was still worried about getting evicted lololol He must just accept that one of his tenants is a singer lol. 

I know it's not much I will be sure to keep the posts coming. 

https://voca.ro/8vslh8lq4IR

https://voca.ro/gGBV663ICZk

 

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Howdy. I'm now determined to work on my cord closure and my chest/ call voice  so I can stop singing breathy and gain a touch more meat to my higher notes around C4-E4. When I sing those notes with a breathy tone my throat get sore afterwards. 

Anyway here's what my practise session sounds like. I realise I'm straining a little bit. I noticed when I try to keep my larynx down the sound gets too dark for my taste. A also blew out my phone's mic again and I wasn't even trying hard to be loud.

Exercises

https://voca.ro/eppg4sPs2fT

https://voca.ro/6uO37haoxlu

Song practice 

https://voca.ro/lBwHd6zz0Nk

Thanks a lot in advance for your input.

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Today I experimented with chest/Call voice. All this airy thinned out stuff I've been doing lately is causing me to strain and hurt my Throat. It's time for a change.

Please critique my voice.

Chest voice/ Oral resonance

https://voca.ro/bi59mkQDLTp

You raise me up

https://voca.ro/gDBhn5oPeCs

Started learning Nothing else matters, my first foray into Rock music. 

Nothing else matters https://voca.ro/PI1FwNpkWbQ

Overall my voice felt MUCH better today than my last post which was a complete strainfest. I felt like my support was a little better as well although that will always be a work in progress. 

Please tell me what you hear and think. 

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