Members Montag Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 he hasnt gotten back to me on how much he hates what i did with it yet, but im itching for somebody other than me and my girlfriend to hear it, so here it is. bernie franks did all the drums and keys and stuff, i added guitar loops and did a little production. this is just what i did with it. it may and likely change. Puddle of Tranquility (yousendit link) edit: here is bernie's hard-to-improve-upon original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bernie Franks Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 No, that's fine. I hope no one else minds the music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members skr3ddy Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 I love the drum beat. It sounds like some odd time signature. My overall impression is this... The whole song sounds like a perfect VERSE. Now it needs a bridge and REALLY ROCKING CHORUS (with guitars) to bring it out into commercial territory. Oh yeah; and of course vocals. Whenever I hear a slow, repetative song like this, I always imagine a dynamic, loud rock-guitar chorus blasting in. That's what I do. I'm a pretty good arranger and improver-upon of other people's ideas. Nice production values. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 4, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 Originally posted by skr3ddy I love the drum beat. It sounds like some odd time signature.My overall impression is this...The whole song sounds like a perfect VERSE. Now it needs a bridge and REALLY ROCKING CHORUS (with guitars) to bring it out into commercial territory. Oh yeah; and of course vocals. Whenever I hear a slow, repetative song like this, I always imagine a dynamic, loud rock-guitar chorus blasting in. That's what I do. I'm a pretty good arranger and improver-upon of other people's ideas.Nice production values. from what i gathered, the time sig is 7/4 im not sure if bernie wants to add a chorus or whatever, but im really into stuff like this as is thank you for listening and commenting:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members veil Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 That was really f'ing good. Love the mellotron. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 4, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 Originally posted by veil That was really f'ing good. Love the mellotron. that's my favourite bit too. that bernie kid is talented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members veil Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 Originally posted by Montag that's my favourite bit too. that bernie kid is talented. You ain't so bad yourself, ace. Did that soundclick link I sent you ever start workin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 4, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 Originally posted by veil You ain't so bad yourself, ace.Did that soundclick link I sent you ever start workin? soundclick is still not working for me:( i think its this new anti virus software:mad: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bernie Franks Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 Originally posted by skr3ddy I love the drum beat. It sounds like some odd time signature. My overall impression is this... The whole song sounds like a perfect VERSE. Now it needs a bridge and REALLY ROCKING CHORUS (with guitars) to bring it out into commercial territory. Oh yeah; and of course vocals. Whenever I hear a slow, repetative song like this, I always imagine a dynamic, loud rock-guitar chorus blasting in. That's what I do. I'm a pretty good arranger and improver-upon of other people's ideas. Nice production values. Thanks for the input. While I would agree with some more parts in some of my other projects, this song is going on a sort of ambient album, so it's pretty much completely void of the verse-chorus-verse kind of music. Some may say it's largely void of music. And my music is mostly instrumental, save for one song about me being a centipede. And that's pretty much spoken word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DaSkip Posted November 4, 2005 Members Share Posted November 4, 2005 I liked it. It was relaxing and I found myself daydreaming. Thanks for taking me away for a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members skr3ddy Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Other collaborations we might imagine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DaSkip Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Originally posted by skr3ddy Other collaborations we might imagine... LOL !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ginnboonmiller Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 That's real nice, Dr. Montag. Real nice. Nice like a pretty girl's smile on a mountaintop in the springtime. EDIT: Sorry, Dr. Franks. Half that prettiness is all your fault. You get the big ups, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 5, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Originally posted by ginnboonmiller That's real nice, Dr. Montag. Real nice. Nice like a pretty girl's smile on a mountaintop in the springtime. EDIT: Sorry, Dr. Franks. Half that prettiness is all your fault. You get the big ups, too. thanks, on behalf of both of us. im gonna upload the original for comparison's sake, methinks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ugly steeple fear Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 very nice. very nice, indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members VicShat Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 5, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 through the magic of time travel, i have added a link to the original in the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Bernie Franks Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Originally posted by Montag through the magic of time travel, i have added a link to the original in the first post. Snap! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members airship71 Posted November 5, 2005 Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Very nice work, guys! Sorry I'm just now listening to this. I saw the thread last night at work but couldn't listen, so I'm just now getting to hear it. Me likey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Montag Posted November 5, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 5, 2005 Originally posted by Bernie Franks Snap! i am a genioos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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