Members gilwe Posted November 28, 2007 Members Share Posted November 28, 2007 .... and of course, any comments / suggestions are more than welcome !! Click Here Keys in action: Yamaha CP60M, Roland JX8P, Roland JV2080, Emu E6400, Hammond XM-1, Prophet 5 and an SH101 doing the opening high pitch arpeggios Warning: There's no English Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Son of HuHefner Posted November 28, 2007 Members Share Posted November 28, 2007 // ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mildbill Posted November 28, 2007 Members Share Posted November 28, 2007 Is that you singing? Good voice, nice arrangement. What are the lyrics about - for us english speakers. S.O.H. - just press the 'play' button near the top right of the page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Son of HuHefner Posted November 28, 2007 Members Share Posted November 28, 2007 Is that you singing? Good voice, nice arrangement. What are the lyrics about - for us english speakers.S.O.H. - just press the 'play' button near the top right of the page. yup, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gilwe Posted November 29, 2007 Author Members Share Posted November 29, 2007 Hi, The lyrics (which are not mine, btw) talk about how anyone who "lose" love, should let the wind carry him/her to a new road of his/her own.... I act as a one-man-band and do all instrumentation, vocals and production. Thanks ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BonsoWonderDog Posted November 29, 2007 Members Share Posted November 29, 2007 I like it Gilwe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gilwe Posted November 30, 2007 Author Members Share Posted November 30, 2007 Thanks Bonso Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mildbill Posted November 30, 2007 Members Share Posted November 30, 2007 .... and of course, any comments / suggestions are more than welcome !!... Well, there's a couple spots where your voice had trouble 'hitting the pitch'. If you're working with a DAW tho, a quick re-take and cut and paste would take care of it quickly. Minor stuff tho- overall, very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Purity_Control Posted November 30, 2007 Members Share Posted November 30, 2007 Well, there's a couple spots where your voice had trouble 'hitting the pitch'. there prob. are, but i'm sure i've heard worse from plenty of known bands. usually i don;t care much for soft rock, but i really enjoyed that... very polished sounding. nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gus Lozada Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Nice music, singing, arrangement...I liked it !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Roald Posted December 19, 2007 Members Share Posted December 19, 2007 +1 nice track! mysterious even, because I don't understand the lyrics great sounds, especially the pad at the start and the chunky CP sound. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Diametro Posted January 2, 2008 Members Share Posted January 2, 2008 I'm hearing a little Tears for Fears (and Pet Shop Boys) in there ... At least when I was liking it the most ... but to me it also could have had a little more synth action as well as more local flavor ... Since it sounds pretty Western, it almost seems like it should be sung at least partly in English or even another language unmistakably not the one you're using now ... but trust me, I do like and here as well the vocals in ... what's IS the language? Good luck ... !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gilwe Posted January 2, 2008 Author Members Share Posted January 2, 2008 It's in Hebrew Well, I first wrote all songs in English to be used for the international market, but at some point decided to convert to the local language. I might record them in English too. Tears for Fears in one of my all time favourites, and "Seeds of Love" in one of the albums I appreciate the most ! Question - How many of you noticed that the drums are sampled, and do you think it would be necessary to use live drums instead, in that particular case ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Allerian Posted January 2, 2008 Members Share Posted January 2, 2008 Funny how the brain works. Track started, and about a minute in I knew I'd heard this before. Listened when you first posted, got distracted, but apparently it stuck. Honestly, that's why I love music in other languages - you have a completely different listening experience by not understanding what the words mean. You've got your sound nailed, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gilwe Posted February 10, 2008 Author Members Share Posted February 10, 2008 Last comments before burning the radio master, please ! http://www.myspace.com/gilweinstock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members wetwareinterface Posted February 10, 2008 Members Share Posted February 10, 2008 don't let gilwe fool you the lyrics are yiddish for "hey, you're such a pretty boy. hey, you're such a pretty boy. you're so pretty" lol just kidding nice track however the vocals are way too high in the mix and have too much e.q. boost at the high frequencies and cause distortion even at really low listening volume. take the e.q. down a lot and the volume down a little bit and you'd have a killer track. as it is it's a bit brittle sounding when he takes a breath or hits a higher note. the music is fine and the vocal performance is really good it's just a bit too much e.q. and the vocal sits too loud in the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gilwe Posted February 10, 2008 Author Members Share Posted February 10, 2008 I know what you mean. Yeh, the vocals stab you from time to time. Will take care of that, although I quite like it like that. I will post the corrected version soon. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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