Members aepoc Posted November 18, 2002 Members Share Posted November 18, 2002 "Every girls lies and love is suicide so around and around we go" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Zakko Posted November 19, 2002 Members Share Posted November 19, 2002 cool cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted November 19, 2002 Members Share Posted November 19, 2002 Cool line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Etienne Rambert Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 No. It is not a good line. But I am outvoted so far. First of all, the subject and verb don't agree. It should be: "Every GIRL lies..." not 'girls lies'. Second: "around and around we go" is overusedand tired long past the boundries of clichedom. "Love is suicide" is good though. I haven't heard that before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ebowist Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 Don't use "love is suicide", thats a direct rip from the chorus of "bodies" by the smashing pumpkins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members richtor Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 Other lines to avoid: "love is a battlefield" "love is a bitch" "l'amour est bleu" "love stinks" "love is all around us" "love love love all we need is love" "I'm tired of love" "Liebe stieg wie ein rotes ist" :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members yeagermeister Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 I have a great idea! When your singer sings "Around and around we GOOOO!!!" make him imitate a circus master and then Keith Emerson can play a creepy carnival inspired organ solo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Deryck Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 Originally posted by richtor "Liebe stieg wie ein rotes ist" :D What? "Love ascended like a red is?" You failed German, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members richtor Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 :o I prefer to think of it as having been invited to pursue another course of study :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WINSTONPISCES Posted November 20, 2002 Members Share Posted November 20, 2002 Originally posted by marcellis No. It is not a good line. But I am outvoted so far.First of all, the subject and verb don't agree. It should be: "Every GIRL lies..." not 'girls lies'. Second: "around and around we go" is overusedand tired long past the boundries of clichedom. "Love is suicide" is good though. I haven't heard that before. I agree with your first 2 points. But come on "Love is suicide" that is old as well. Listen to some Smashing Pumpkins songs. WiNSTON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Eclipse66 Posted November 21, 2002 Members Share Posted November 21, 2002 Originally posted by ebowist Don't use "love is suicide", thats a direct rip from the chorus of "bodies" by the smashing pumpkins. Exactly. Although you may not know the lyrics to the song, aepoc, alot of other people will acuse you of stealing the line. My advice would be just to alter it somewhat, find synonyms for suicide, or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DailyGrind Posted November 21, 2002 Members Share Posted November 21, 2002 Originally posted by richtor Other lines to avoid: "love is a battlefield" "love is a bitch" "l'amour est bleu" "love stinks" "love is all around us" "love love love all we need is love" "I'm tired of love" "Liebe stieg wie ein rotes ist" :D Don't forget "what is love..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members aepoc Posted November 21, 2002 Author Members Share Posted November 21, 2002 I was tired when I wrote the line in the thread. I'm usually very good at grammar (though I'm tired now too, so gimme a break). I knew Billy Corgan would {censored} me up! I've since changed it: "everybody lies and love is suicide so around and around we go nevermind the signs you feel inside you gotta just let it go" I will work on the "love is suicide" part. Any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Etienne Rambert Posted November 21, 2002 Members Share Posted November 21, 2002 I've never heard the "love is suicide" thing. I've never heard the Smashing Pumpkins.Heard of them though. I don't listen to newer music.I kind of like listening to old music on AM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members richtor Posted November 22, 2002 Members Share Posted November 22, 2002 Originally posted by aepoc I will work on the "love is suicide" part. Any suggestions? I think this it the part where I came in. Time to go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blitz Posted November 22, 2002 Members Share Posted November 22, 2002 Perhaps it should be: "Everybody lies, Love is genocide, A circle jerk of sorts, Get the {censored} out of my life." yeah, that's it! riiighhttt.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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