Members sydfan Posted February 25, 2003 Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Could you give it a listen? Thanks!A Thing Or Two Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cool_E Posted February 25, 2003 Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 I like the band name: Captain Cupcake The guitar in the beginning is pretty cool. Very rhythmic chorus. I think the mix is pretty good. Nice harmonies. I might have added that shaker earlier in v2. The hook stands out pretty well. Do I hear harmonies on the instrumental? I think you should have doubled up on the chorus after the instrumental and then got out at about 4 minutes. Keep it tight. I'm usually tempted to go too long with a groove that I like but in the end keeping the song shorter is usually better. Pretty cool. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ClusterOne Posted February 25, 2003 Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 (off topic) At least a couple people on this forum are from my area You and kingnome are both from allentown. I'm from King of Prussia, and I go to school up near penn state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sydfan Posted February 25, 2003 Author Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Originally posted by ClusterOne (off topic) At least a couple people on this forum are from my area You and kingnome are both from allentown. I'm from King of Prussia, and I go to school up near penn state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sydfan Posted February 25, 2003 Author Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Originally posted by cool_E I like the band name: Captain Cupcake The guitar in the beginning is pretty cool. Very rhythmic chorus. I think the mix is pretty good. Nice harmonies. I might have added that shaker earlier in v2. The hook stands out pretty well. Do I hear harmonies on the instrumental? I think you should have doubled up on the chorus after the instrumental and then got out at about 4 minutes. Keep it tight. I'm usually tempted to go too long with a groove that I like but in the end keeping the song shorter is usually better. Pretty cool. I like it. You're probably right about the doubling of the chorus. When I first finished it, I thought the end sounded really cool, but now I'm bored with it. As for the shaker, there is no shaker. I wonder what you hear there? There are harmonies during the instrumental. Thanks for listening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cool_E Posted February 25, 2003 Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Originally posted by sydfan As for the shaker, there is no shaker. I wonder what you hear there? maybe it's a hi-hat? or tamborine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sydfan Posted February 25, 2003 Author Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Originally posted by cool_E maybe it's a hi-hat? or tamborine? It must be the Hi -hat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members veil Posted February 25, 2003 Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 It kind of reminded me of Tenacious D. I hope that doesn't offend you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sydfan Posted February 25, 2003 Author Members Share Posted February 25, 2003 Originally posted by veil It kind of reminded me of Tenacious D. I hope that doesn't offend you. Not at all. I just heard them for the first time a couple of weeks ago. I only heard part of a tune, but I really liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LTC Posted February 26, 2003 Members Share Posted February 26, 2003 Originally posted by cool_E I think you should have doubled up on the chorus after the instrumental and then got out at about 4 minutes. Keep it tight. I'm usually tempted to go too long with a groove that I like but in the end keeping the song shorter is usually better. I agree with this, and would also have used something more like the instrumental at the end of the song as a bridge. Other than that, I think it sounds great. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members zinzin Posted February 27, 2003 Members Share Posted February 27, 2003 when you start singing louder (chorus i guess) you sound like dave grohl from the foo fighter and it could be as well a melody of theirs.meant as a compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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