Members pumpkins33 Posted August 22, 2004 Members Share Posted August 22, 2004 I wrote this song for a CD I've been compiling the past few months, it was the second song recorded for it. It's called "Disposable Heart". Tell me what you think: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/erikpielermusic.htm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members 69lespaul Posted August 22, 2004 Members Share Posted August 22, 2004 Very catchy alright. Has a Dylanesque quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members mmmiddle Posted August 22, 2004 Members Share Posted August 22, 2004 Not bad. I couldn't listen to the whole thing because of the recording quality. I think it could be a good tune if you mixed it better and got the bass to where it doesn't just destroy everything else in the mix. I couldn't tell what the lyrics were from listening either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members pumpkins33 Posted August 24, 2004 Author Members Share Posted August 24, 2004 yeah, it's kinda tough working with a 4-track tape recorder. You'll probably notice there are more than 4 tracks on this song, and thats because I mixed the original four tracks to a cd, then mixed that into one track on the 4-track, and then added three more tracks. And yeah, one of the reasons the bass doesn't sound too good is probably because of the fact that it isn't really bass, it's guitar using a whammy pedal an octave down, the trick jack white used on seven nation army. i did probably make it a bit to loud, but listening to the mix on headphones it can sometimes be hard to determine how it will translate to listening to it regularly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members zinzin Posted August 26, 2004 Members Share Posted August 26, 2004 Originally posted by pumpkins33 but listening to the mix on headphones it can sometimes be hard to determine how it will translate to listening to it regularly. NEVER-EVER-MIX-WITH-HEADPHONES!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LanRover Posted August 31, 2004 Members Share Posted August 31, 2004 the trick jack white used on seven nation army The first thing i thought of when I heard this song was The White Stripes. "I wanna be the boy that warms your mother's heart." That's a good thing though.. I like the band. And thats some impressive determination to mix that all together with a 4 track Cheers Lan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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