Members Marko Posted August 11, 2008 Members Share Posted August 11, 2008 This song started as a spontaneous Drummer & Guitar jam recorded (overhead/cassette) in the music room. I thought it had a great sound, so I wrote a great (very busy) Bass part for it and these lyrics. Then I got my Lead Singer (very powerful voice) over, I sang it for him a couple times and he took it from there. That weekend we all got the whole thing played/recorded on the cassette, and when I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted August 11, 2008 Members Share Posted August 11, 2008 when I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Marko Posted August 11, 2008 Author Members Share Posted August 11, 2008 Looking forward to hearing it.A little repetitive....Not sure about the above line - syllables - drop "cause" maybeWhat kind of 80's tune would this be like? ZZTop/Stones/Huey Lewis etc... It sounded kinda Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Sentry68 Posted August 13, 2008 Members Share Posted August 13, 2008 I think I have to agree with ido's points. That's what I came up with before I read his post. Pretty obvious straight 4 rock tune, no great insights, no solution for global warming, no curve balls. Nothing wrong with that, but of course it's not on the bleeding edge either. They'd dance all nite to this stuff in a bar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Marko Posted August 13, 2008 Author Members Share Posted August 13, 2008 They'd dance all nite to this stuff in a bar. Well, that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Sentry68 Posted August 13, 2008 Members Share Posted August 13, 2008 Yep, no worries man. I was stating the obvious, but it's hard to tear into it with scathing critiques. It's straightforward, just like it's meant to be. No need for major changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Rad Skronker Posted August 13, 2008 Members Share Posted August 13, 2008 Yo Marko, I like the lyrics. With those lyrics I'm hearin' a country song. Some twangin' tele licks with some pedal steel for good measure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Microwave Walrus Posted August 13, 2008 Members Share Posted August 13, 2008 your lyrics looks solid to me, this is the 2nd of your poems/songs i just looked at... ...but where are the links to the recordings? i wanna HEAR this stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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