Members The dman Posted January 7, 2009 Members Share Posted January 7, 2009 Here's something I came up with today, a raw idea of a verse some words and a melody. I just wanted to throw it out there and see if you guys think there's anything there worth pursuing . I only had a half an hour with it. Its only 47 seconds long. I'm not sure where I want to take it but need to find the time to sit down with it. Sorry not a happy song but more of a reflection of what I see happening to people around here lately, people on the edge of losing everything. Comments welcome http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1025530 New Song The trees and the ground are frozen againAnd I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted January 7, 2009 Members Share Posted January 7, 2009 This sounds like a great scene-setting, ready to build a song on, exploring the sense of anxious but not necessarily optimistic anticipation that you paint -- paint in a watercolor-like wash of varying shades of winter gray... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members smross Posted January 7, 2009 Members Share Posted January 7, 2009 Sounds good, kid rock acousticish? It sounds kind of Country... I would expect the distorted guitar to come in shortly after 47. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members The dman Posted January 7, 2009 Author Members Share Posted January 7, 2009 Thanks guys yea the hardest part is where to take it next and having more time to sit down with it wouldn't hurt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted January 7, 2009 Members Share Posted January 7, 2009 Sounds good, kid rock acousticish? It sounds kind of Country... I would expect the distorted guitar to come in shortly after 47. NOOOooooooooo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Boydog Posted January 8, 2009 Members Share Posted January 8, 2009 NOOOooooo oooo! +1 :facepalm: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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