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Just some lyrics "Bygones Be Gone"


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What do you think of these lyrics? I finished the music several months ago and now I'm trying to get the lyrics up to par. Lyrics are definetly my weekness but I've been reading a lot about them and I think I'm getting better. Thanks!


Bygones Be Gone




I was born in autumn to a Gemini


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I like it... except for the bridge. Sorry. I really do like the way you're saying what you're saying. Everything has a familiar yet fresh slant. Except the bridge. The bridge loses that freshness and sounds cliched. And I should know, I am the king of cliches.


If it were me, I'd completely rewrite the bridge.

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