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Rhyming struggles: Kerosine


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1. and THEN the CAN of KEroSINE

2. She was LOVEly in a pair of jeans.

So lovely it would scare a queen

tear a scream



Very good.


I was thinking: So lovely and so mean. (could be a nice juxtaposition of descriptors)

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How about:


"Baby mistook my kerosine, for vaseline

Now my naughty parts are on fire

Then she mistook Bactene, for Afro-sheen

And my hair smells like a medicated tire"


Now THAT is pure songwriting genius...uh....isn't it?

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