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  • Let's Write a Song

    It's too dead in here.

     

     

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    Before you leave the house, look in the mirror and take one thing off.

    -Coco Chanel

  • #2

    I always thought

    He was kind of callow

    But after she died

    And he raised those two kids

    I realized it was me who was shallow

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    Before you leave the house, look in the mirror and take one thing off.

    -Coco Chanel

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    • rsadasiv
      rsadasiv commented
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      Meh.

       

      How about a Raspberries type thing?

       

      You made me wait so long

      With all your carrying on

      But I had to have you


    • Lee Knight
      Lee Knight commented
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      rsadasiv wrote:

      I always thought


      He was kind of callow


      But after she died


      And he raised those two kids


      I realized it was me who was shallow




       


      I always thought


      He was kind of callow


      But after she died


      And he raised those two kids


      I realized it was me who was shallow


       


      Then there's old Pete


      Drinking one gallon Gallo


      Everyday on his porch


      But he's still burning her torch


      And I realize it was me who was shallow


  • #3
    Wow. i think that's pretty cool. I love for you taken it. I want to mess with what you've got a little bit if that's okay but I'm really liking this.
    __________
    Ain't no sacrilege to call Elvis king
    Dad is great and all but he never could sing -
    Jesus

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    • #4
      So...

      I started working this up. I've mangled the form a little in that instead of 2 verse sections before the bridge/chorus (I'm calling it the bridge) it goes to an intro again and then 3rd section of the 1st verse.

      Currently we have

      Intro
      V1a
      V1b
      Bridge
      V2a...

      But I've got

      Intro
      V1a
      V1b
      Re-intro
      V1c
      Bridge
      V2a...

      Care to take a swing at that V1c?
      __________
      Ain't no sacrilege to call Elvis king
      Dad is great and all but he never could sing -
      Jesus

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      • Lee Knight
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        :emoticon-char-017:


      • rsadasiv
        rsadasiv commented
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        Lee Knight wrote:
        So...

        I started working this up. I've mangled the form a little in that instead of 2 verse sections before the bridge/chorus (I'm calling it the bridge) it goes to an intro again and then 3rd section of the 1st verse.

        Currently we have

        Intro
        V1a
        V1b
        Bridge
        V2a...

        But I've got

        Intro
        V1a
        V1b
        Re-intro
        V1c
        Bridge
        V2a...

        Care to take a swing at that V1c?

        Can you update the lyric markers with this structure? (original below)

         

        V1.
        You made me wait so long
        With all your carrying on
        But I had to have you

        I couldn't be that strong
        To be your tag along
        Still I had to have you

        C1.
        That night
        Did it feel right
        Or was just a flight
        Of my imagination?
        You know
        That I would stand and fight
        If it just might
        Get me your invitation

        V2.
        You had me on the phone
        Tryin' to hold my own
        But I just had to have you

        Did I play the fool
        Did I lose my cool
        Cause I just had to have you?

        C2.
        That night
        Did it feel right
        Or was just a flight
        Of my imagination?
        You know
        That I would stand and fight
        If it just might
        Get me your invitation

        B.
        Walk you down the avenue
        It's all I could do and I think that you knew
        That I just had to have you

        C3.
        That night
        Did it feel right
        Or was just a flight
        Of my imagination?
        You know
        That I would stand and fight
        If it just might
        Get me your invitation









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