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I took it upon myself to try and record something full length.

 

Feedback is welcome, keeping in mind that I don't really know how to be a vocalist or want to be one, so crits on my vocals aren't going to really matter.

 

I think I actually had a much more firm idea about what I wanted to do musically than what I wanted for the vocal melodies. When I have a singer this is one of those times when I'd ask them if they could come up with any ideas for melodies.

 

http://www.scumvalley.com/misc/mdre-f.mp3

 

stock (other than wilkinson 3 saddle bridge) fender standard telecaster and SX cheapo bass.

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Wow. Thats awesome and very inspiring.

I liked your vocals actually - they suit the music very well.

The guitar toanz were very impressive- how did you record them?

I'm hoping to start recording at home soon and if I can get close to that vibe I'll be very happy.

My only minor critisism- turn the {censored}ing crash cymbal down!

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Wow. Thats awesome and very inspiring.

I liked your vocals actually - they suit the music very well.

The guitar toanz were very impressive- how did you record them?

I'm hoping to start recording at home soon and if I can get close to that vibe I'll be very happy.

My only minor critisism- turn the {censored}ing crash cymbal down!

 

thank you for the compliment.

 

the guitar tracks were recorded with my tele into a pod studio ux1. if I recall I mostly used an ac30 style amp.

 

it's pretty much impossible to get fake-drums right, if you're someone who really just wants real drums (like me). maybe one day I'll be able to record real drums on my songs.

 

let me rephrase: it's impossible for *me* to get fake drums right. maybe other people can. :)

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Very nice song - only one section I didn't like as much as the rest - the bit around 1.32-40 - just felt a bit disjointed compared to the rest. Excellent guitaring and well mixed. I thought the fake drums sounded OK (what did you use?). Parts of it reminded me of some of the guitar on OK Computer (eg. Let Down).

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Very nice song - only one section I didn't like as much as the rest - the bit around 1.32-40 - just felt a bit disjointed compared to the rest. Excellent guitaring and well mixed. I thought the fake drums sounded OK (what did you use?). Parts of it reminded me of some of the guitar on OK Computer (eg. Let Down).

 

thanks :)

 

regarding the drums, they were put together using a sequencing program called acoustica beatcraft. kind of painstaking but it gets the job done.

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thank you for the compliment.


the guitar tracks were recorded with my tele into a pod studio ux1. if I recall I mostly used an ac30 style amp.


it's pretty much impossible to get fake-drums right, if you're someone who really just wants real drums (like me). maybe one day I'll be able to record real drums on my songs.


let me rephrase: it's impossible for *me* to get fake drums right. maybe other people can.
:)

 

On the subject of drum programming fruity loops is good - easy work flow, sounds good in a mix.

Also I'm a big Reason fan. Reason is one of those things you either love or hate.

The new one (5) has a drum modeler that is meant to sound amazing and is fun to use plus of course gazillions of samples and a groove generator which gives it more of a natural feel.

If you get a genuine copy (:lol: yeah I know) it can come bundled with Record which is a full DAW.

Also, one of the clean sounds you used in the verse sounded a bit like a sequenced synth -I like the way you layered the guitars but I think a few bits of analog synth would also suit your sound.

That part reminded me of a darker Cars!

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Some really nice stuff going on there. My thoughts:

 

- The guitar part from 0:18 - 0:25 seems like it could be catchy but needs to be fleshed out a little and a little more prominent in the mix. Maybe tweak the tone a little.

- Very nice, head bob inducing, rhythm parts under where the vocals first kick in.

- I like the vibrato

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On the subject of drum programming fruity loops is good - easy work flow, sounds good in a mix.

 

 

thanks -- I tried fruity loops in the past and wasn't sure exactly what I was doing. maybe I should try it again and make more of an effort to learn it.

 

thanks everyone else who commented, it's appreciated. Going to start on my next big song soon.

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