I need some constructive criticism, please...

[wro]

guys, pls let me know what is right and wrong in my singing:

 

hey hey my my - neil young

https://soundcloud.com/coracoesementes/ensaio-19-05-2013-hey-hey-my?in=coracoesementes/sets/ensaio-19-05-2013

 

Heart full of soul - The Yardbirds

https://soundcloud.com/coracoesementes/ensaio-19-05-2013-heart-full?in=coracoesementes/sets/ensaio-19-05-2013

 

Learn to fly - Foo Fighters

https://soundcloud.com/coracoesementes/ensaio-19-05-2013-learn-to-fly?in=coracoesementes/sets/ensaio-19-05-2013

 

thanks a lot !

[deepflight]

Sorry to admit that I just listened to the first one, and it isn't a song I know super-well, but it seems like you are a little bit off pitch wise or something.  You sound especially shaky at the start, your pitch slides off from where I think you want it on that first "hey hey."   I think you may be flat about 1:30 in on the "and once you're gone you can't go back" part.  You settle in more and it gets better later in the song, however.  3:30 is much better.  And I do like the timbre of your voice with that accompaniment.  

[davie]

Yes, I agree a bit off pitch. But cool rock and roll timbre. Singing sounds a bit tense, I can hear your larynx shooting upwards. I think it might be affecting the pitch as well. Singing the higher pitches still always be a challenge, even for the best singers. There's always going to be the tendency to 'grab' your throat if you're not careful. I would practice some exercises to help stabilize the larynx first.

[wro]

at 1.30 i am flat on purpose because i am kinda copying a live recording by neil young. i agree with the rest, thank you so much for your feedback.