Members machinegun78_2 Posted August 5, 2005 Members Share Posted August 5, 2005 ...and tell me if it sucks or not. just curious. Push Off Biography Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members machinegun78_2 Posted August 8, 2005 Author Members Share Posted August 8, 2005 Originally posted by machinegun78_2 ...and tell me if it sucks or not. just curious. Push Off Biography nobody checked this out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members fastplant Posted August 8, 2005 Members Share Posted August 8, 2005 Not bad, but a few things: First, the grammar isn't perfect, something you might want to change. Also, I'd lose the first paragraph and start with the second. Maybe add some of the info from the 1st paragraph into the rest of the bio, but I like how the 2nd paragraph opens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Brian Krashpad Posted August 8, 2005 Members Share Posted August 8, 2005 Legibility of the text is an issue-- hard to read at that fontsize. I'd make the type at least 150% of what it currently is. BK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members machinegun78_2 Posted August 8, 2005 Author Members Share Posted August 8, 2005 Originally posted by Brian Krashpad Legibility of the text is an issue-- hard to read at that fontsize. I'd make the type at least 150% of what it currently is. BK will work on that.....I'll have to speak to our webmaster, as he does those things. I just handle pics and text... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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