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Since I don't seem to recognize many of you, I'll drop in here and ask for some honest feedback on this here Vets Forum Minijam. I've gotten a flood of positive feedback about it, but just the same, I know it's not perfect from a structure standpoint...my main concern was keeping it right around 4 minutes in length.

 

I'd like to know what you'd have done differently and where you'd have done it.

 

It's heavy, but I don't mean to exclude folks who don't write heavy stuff...I want your opinions as well.

 

You can find the song in my signature

 

Thanks in advance.

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sounds like there is some interesting stuff in there, but hard to tell on my computer speakers. I wouldnt be so concerned about length. Just let songs write them selves. after the long solo arround 3 minutes seems like the song should end pretty soon, or do something completely different.

 

 

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Originally posted by Brian Marshall

sounds like there is some interesting stuff in there, but hard to tell on my computer speakers. I wouldnt be so concerned about length. Just let songs write them selves. after the long solo arround 3 minutes seems like the song should end pretty soon, or do something completely different.



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Thanks, that is the sort of thing I'm looking for

 

I appreciate your input

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