Members Brian Marshall Posted August 21, 2002 Members Share Posted August 21, 2002 Finally my band gout our songs up. I think this is our best song. It is called One Track Mind. Brian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WattsUrizen Posted August 21, 2002 Members Share Posted August 21, 2002 Ok, a listened to a couple of songs: 'The Door': Interesting with its vocals, electronic beats and strings. It's very unique which I enjoyed. But I just found the lead vocals to be a little annoying after a while, I think the half-whispering/droning style is more effective if broken up with stronger clean singing. I also found it to be repetitive, with really the same phrase repeated for nearly the entire song. 'Shine': A good catchy tune with appropriate harmonised vocals and electronic beats. Here the lead vocals are fairly good, with some good melody and rock attitude. But maybe there's too much of a good thing, with the same melody repeated throughout. Personally, I'd like to hear more variation. It doesn't have to be much, since it isn't really the song for it, but just a few little twists to the main melody, and maybe change a few things here and there (a slightly different harmony, for example) would really make this a winner. Hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Brian Marshall Posted August 22, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 22, 2002 hmm you listened to the wrong stuff. I guess i forgot the link.here it is http://bandsounds.com/alectrophobia/music/onetrackmind.mp3 see if that works. Im such a dumbass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members WattsUrizen Posted August 22, 2002 Members Share Posted August 22, 2002 Originally posted by Brian Marshall hmm you listened to the wrong stuff. I guess i forgot the link. here it is http://bandsounds.com/alectrophobia/music/onetrackmind.mp3 see if that works. Im such a dumbass. LOL. Ok honest mistake I'll listen to it and get back to you. I hope my comments for the other stuff were a little helpful, anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Brian Marshall Posted August 22, 2002 Author Members Share Posted August 22, 2002 that stuff is actually pretty old, and it all is pretty depressing. I tried to start a band arround that sound for a couple years, but it just doesnt go over here in Seattle. Brian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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