what do you think of my song

[Knuuckles]

I dont have a title at thet moment. I'm brand new to song writing also so go ahead and comment but dont laught tooooo hard

 

It goes at a relatively normal pace, and this is a metal song (with a nice hardcore metal voice singing them)

 

And I felt a little lifeless

But I felt a little justified

So I went ahead and damaged her

Without shifting a cell

See I didn

[orourke]

It's kinda creepy. Probably works with the music.