Members sydfan Posted January 24, 2003 Members Share Posted January 24, 2003 This is one of the tunes on a CD I just finished (my first one!) and I would like for people to hear it and tell me what they think. Please be honest!!! Be forwarned, it is a Christian song! Thanks!!"Run Down" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members cool_E Posted January 24, 2003 Members Share Posted January 24, 2003 cool, very smooth opening. The vocals work well.I love the groove and all the instruments soundvery clear & clean. The overall effect of the mix seemslike too much stereo. Also the bass sounded a bit thin(but I'm at work listening on cheap PC speakers). From what I can tell the songwriting is very good.Musically well done. I didn't catch all the lyricsbut what I did pick up was nice. I'm very impressed. Excellent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members AlwayzMisBhavin Posted January 24, 2003 Members Share Posted January 24, 2003 Originally posted by sydfan This is one of the tunes on a CD I just finished (my first one!) and I would like for people to hear it and tell me what they think. Please be honest!!! Be forwarned, it is a Christian song! Thanks!! "Run Down" I'd like to hear a little guitar and or keyboard though.. the vocals were strong and not bad at all.. but I like some of the other instruments to stand out a bit more. Great start tho. Good Luck Alwayz MisBhavin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Apie Posted January 24, 2003 Members Share Posted January 24, 2003 Cool song, Christian or not. I like everything apart from the bass and the effect on the voice.The bass is tin and to much guitar-like. It should be much warmer and ... well, more bassy (is that spelled correct).The singing is good, but to much 'layered'. It's cool in the beginning, but in the chorus it's to much for my ears. But hey, who am I. I couldn't do better myself. Keep on the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members sydfan Posted January 24, 2003 Author Members Share Posted January 24, 2003 Thanks guys...I've heard the same sentiment about the bass on other forums I've posted this song. It's a Rickenbacker, and I have a lot of trouble getting a smooth bassy sound out of it. I should work on the EQ a bit more! Thanks for taking the time to listen!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BigWood Posted September 12, 2006 Members Share Posted September 12, 2006 Damn, this thread is old.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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