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Some lyrics I wrote... please critique


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Whoa there Dr. Tweed! You got the "Just Got Back From Iraq" adrenalin still pumping? Assaulted those lyrics like a swatter to a fly you did - all red-faced and sneering. Or, is your opinion embedded somehow? Golly, let me think...


Give him time BlinkLine, give him time.


Those lyrics hold some truth within them? I remember Neil Young prefacing a song telling his audience: "Here's a song guaranteed to bring you right down...it's called, Don't Let It Bring You Down". It was a song that I actually liked.


As with any lyrics, the instrumental gives invaluable support. If I could hear the recording I'd have a more qualified answer for you. Otherwise, I'd say they are kinda dark.

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