Members guitardude24 Posted March 26, 2006 Members Share Posted March 26, 2006 Hey guys...I posted a long time ago with my first real lyric, got some really helpful advise, so I'll do it again! The first song was kinda about teenaged heartbreak, etc...I've kinda been sucked into this sappy stage of writing, but I don't know if it's still good lyrics or just crap... So, here's another lyric I wrote when away on vacation about this girl, kinda being like "I miss you/This is how I feel about you" My biggest problem is creating real verses...I put in the number of syllables needed in each chorus Everything Between- (Needs opening verse)767187620 Pre-Chorus-Now I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members guitardude24 Posted March 28, 2006 Author Members Share Posted March 28, 2006 NM... she's no longer in my life...stupid me, thinking she liked me! On to bigger and better things! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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