Members gibson9778 Posted April 14, 2006 Members Share Posted April 14, 2006 i would like some feedback on the song. i do think that the second verse needs to be a little longer and the ending needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gibson9778 Posted April 14, 2006 Author Members Share Posted April 14, 2006 why didn't the link work? oh well, i put it up on soundclick so.... check it out. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=470195 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members scott korey Posted April 15, 2006 Members Share Posted April 15, 2006 does you have vocals in mind? i think it's a good foundation, i'd really like to hear what you do with it in terms of melody, lyrics.nice guitar tone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members janusmanus Posted April 15, 2006 Members Share Posted April 15, 2006 ? liked the guitar tone too. if it is intended as an instrumental track it definitely needs work.the present form is very repetitive and the orchestration makes it somewhat monotonous but ? guess the multitrack recording will be hugely different than such jukebox recording. words will fill the solo gaps but it wil still need to be furnished towards the end, some (faster)tempo variation perhaps. ? suppose you have the lyrics to it but wanted to hear what it musically promised to an audience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gibson9778 Posted April 15, 2006 Author Members Share Posted April 15, 2006 i'm sorry. yeah it will eventually have vocals. we don't have a singer yet. i just wanted to post for some feedback. well appreciated guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members orourke Posted April 15, 2006 Members Share Posted April 15, 2006 It reminded me a little of some of the stuff on Iggy Pop's "Kill City" album. Not in a derivative way, it just has the Keith Richards in a funhouse mirror kind of feel. The tune needs a good singer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gibson9778 Posted April 17, 2006 Author Members Share Posted April 17, 2006 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members gibson9778 Posted April 19, 2006 Author Members Share Posted April 19, 2006 bump again. nobody has anything to say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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