Members PhunkyPhredv3 Posted November 16, 2006 Members Share Posted November 16, 2006 i was asleep at dawn, when i realized the Earth had set on my Sun. The World is flyin' away from me, at a hyperbolic curvature, free.. from all my deluuuuuuusions. woke up that night, couldn't find my light. it's gone. gone gone away. and dark dark dark today The World is flyin' away from me, in a hyperbolic cuuuurve, free.. from all my deluuuuuuusions. Closing my eyes, no difference inside. it's gone. gone gone away. and dark dark dark today.. and forever. work in progress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted November 16, 2006 Members Share Posted November 16, 2006 Some good imagery in this. A bit depressing but keeps my interest....What style of music are you thinking of putting behind this?Keep working and post updates.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members PhunkyPhredv3 Posted November 16, 2006 Author Members Share Posted November 16, 2006 Originally posted by ido1957 Some good imagery in this. A bit depressing but keeps my interest....What style of music are you thinking of putting behind this? Keep working and post updates.... Stripped down minimalistic Folk with Layered vocals. thanks for reading. indeed.. it's depressing... but i'm fighting with my girlfriend..or ex.. or i dunno what she is.. and work sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members dsotm321 Posted November 25, 2006 Members Share Posted November 25, 2006 I like it. I agree with above, good imagery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members PhunkyPhredv3 Posted November 27, 2006 Author Members Share Posted November 27, 2006 Originally posted by dsotm321 I like it. I agree with above, good imagery. oh, thanks i don't come on this side of the forum much. i poke around Guitar Jam a bit. i appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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