Members chrsz Posted February 29, 2008 Members Share Posted February 29, 2008 Hi everyone, just wanted to get some honest opinions on our first song. My girlfriend and I recorded this about a week ago. It's just acoustic and vocals. Any input greatly appreciated. Thanks!!p.s. I'm quite happy with the sound of my Larrivee OM-1 on this song! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=808169&content=music Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members blue2blue Posted February 29, 2008 Members Share Posted February 29, 2008 Welcome to the Songwriting Forum, Chris! Sounds really strong for a first effort. Very solidly performed and sung and a nice clean recording (some may have an ish with the guitar delay-derived stereo, but what you gonna do, y'know? I think it sounds fine and brings some stereo dimension to things. Maybe the only reason it even gets my attention is because I was just wrestling with one of my own guitar parts trying to get just the right stereo-spread out of a delay.) The chords and melody sound good, everything seems in place. I'm none too good at following lyrics without a lyric sheet, so I'll pass without extended comment about those (unless you want to post the lyrics) but the few bits I caught sounded fine. It looks like you're off to a very good start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mr.O Posted February 29, 2008 Members Share Posted February 29, 2008 I dig the chorus!!!! Well done over all!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members macresto Posted March 1, 2008 Members Share Posted March 1, 2008 Very nice song. I like the sound of the guitar, her voice, which is very nice to listen to and finally the melody - so basically, that's gonna be everything... Do you sing yourself? It wold suit this kind of music with some kind of supporting vocal. I can really hear a deeper vocal in the chorus singing the vocal line very precisely giving the lead vocal space for good improvisations. Nice song! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members chrsz Posted March 1, 2008 Author Members Share Posted March 1, 2008 Thanks for the input! My problem is that I can't sing and play at the same time, but I guess I can always work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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