Members ammaringnyc Posted June 19, 2009 Members Share Posted June 19, 2009 I know the lyrics and my singing need some work and the drum beat sucks. But I am more concerned with structure. Should some parts be longer/shorter, should I cut something out completely or move stuff around. What do you think. The song is Happen to me 2.0 on www.myspace.com/spiralwall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rhino55 Posted June 19, 2009 Members Share Posted June 19, 2009 hey man I tried listening but for some reason the computer here doesnt do well with the myspace. That being said, from what I heard it seems like you have a good grasp of what makes a decent pop song. I didnt make it all the way through but I will later. And then I'll have something brilliant to say! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members TravvyBear Posted June 19, 2009 Members Share Posted June 19, 2009 I think if the recording got cleaned up a bit, it would sound really awesome, because it sounds good now. I'm a sucker for pop songs, heh, it was good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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