Members stickboymusic Posted October 25, 2009 Members Share Posted October 25, 2009 Hello I posted this song as a rough video a short while back and finally got round to recording it today..... after being with it the last 4 hours i dont fell 100 percent happy with it i dont think.... maybe i have just heard it too much.... or maybe it just isnt a good one.... Appreciate any helpful feedback http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=977998&songID=8264716 xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ontological Posted October 25, 2009 Members Share Posted October 25, 2009 I liked the acoustic version of this song but now I think this is more like a dance mix. I'm not crazy about it. I'd try it without the drums and I'd bring your voice up in the mix. You've got a cool voice so I think that should be the most prominent "instrument". I do like the banjo, but I'm biased in that regard. Over all the quality of the recording seems good, I'm just not crazy about the drums. I'll give you a three out four thumbs up. :thu: Cheers, Deric Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted October 25, 2009 Author Members Share Posted October 25, 2009 yeh you're probably right - im not that keen on it either i don't think.... i was just trying to take it somewhere else, make it a little different but have probably gone too far..... maybe a more stripped down version would be better thanks man x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members rsadasiv Posted October 26, 2009 Members Share Posted October 26, 2009 yeh you're probably right - im not that keen on it either i don't think.... i was just trying to take it somewhere else, make it a little different but have probably gone too far..... maybe a more stripped down version would be betterthanks manx I like the idea, but that "four on the floor" snare is just horrid. I would keep the acoustic guitar but not the banjo. The subtractive synth is ok but too loud, and if it had some kind of tempo synched effect it would fit better. More reverb/chorus on the "uh-oh" vocal part - if you brought the vocal clips into a sampler and started messing with them there it would be cool. Again, good song, nice idea. The bam-bam-bam-bam snare was the only deal breaker for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members chriscarnucci Posted October 26, 2009 Members Share Posted October 26, 2009 I have to agree with the other posts. The beat was distracting. I will say that I like where the rest of the song is going! Definately worth working on I would say! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members stickboymusic Posted October 26, 2009 Author Members Share Posted October 26, 2009 absolutely - i dont really know what happened...i used to be so good at this...haha....ive been going through those wierd "creative block" periods for nearly a year and finally got back to recording yesterday and just put EVERYTHING on it , to the point that now the song is lost amongst a load of sounds..... its time for a rethink on this one thanks for the comments x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members andy789 Posted October 26, 2009 Members Share Posted October 26, 2009 Have a look! __________________________________________________golf setR9 DriverAP2 IronsR9 460 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Epplesauce Posted October 26, 2009 Members Share Posted October 26, 2009 just take out the drums until the part that comes in around 1:35. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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