Members Lucius Posted September 14, 2005 Members Share Posted September 14, 2005 I am more interested in the lyrical content then anything but feel free to critique what ever you like. Cheers Lucius http://www.nomotherspride.com/MP3/NMP-WalkAway.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Mojambo Posted September 16, 2005 Members Share Posted September 16, 2005 I liked it. It had a nice Soundgarden vibe to it. Good work. My only suggestion would be to maybe vary up the main guitar riff a little more during the verse, just so it doesn't get too repetitive. Other than that, the guitar work just tears it up the whole way through. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Lucius Posted September 16, 2005 Author Members Share Posted September 16, 2005 Originally posted by Mojambo I liked it.It had a nice Soundgarden vibe to it.Good work. My only suggestion would be to maybe vary up the main guitar riff a little more during the verse, just so it doesn't get too repetitive. Other than that, the guitar work just tears it up the whole way through. Thanks mate. I have thought about switching up the guitar parts a bunch or perhaps adding another layer to it (perhaps chords). We are hitting the studio in mid October so I want to have this worked out before we get there. Cheers Lucius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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