Members SilverBeat Posted January 23, 2017 Members Share Posted January 23, 2017 [h=2][/h] This is my December 2016 song, I completed the final mix Friday The Way She Smiles - Listen at - I never Saw her eyes If I would have I would have seen through the lies She never let me in If she would have She would have Thought less to sin Chorus I really love the way she smiles I really need the way it makes me feel inside I'm gonna miss the way she smiles I'm gonna miss the things she never had to hide, the good times So many times I tried Tried to reach out To a love that must of died So tender is the pain When you love her And you find your loves in vain Repeat Chorus So many ways she delights me So many ways she excites me But I can't ignore the rain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members RadioJunky Posted January 25, 2017 Members Share Posted January 25, 2017 I really Like your sound and clever lyrics. I tried to listened to a few of your song but your page is loading slow.I will stop back at you ReverbNation page when I have more time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members DeepEnd Posted January 26, 2017 Members Share Posted January 26, 2017 Nice job. A few typos in the lyrics, as follows. You should get someone to proofread them before you post. I never saw her eyes If I would have I would have seen through the lies She never let me in If she would have She would have thought less to sin Chorus I really love the way she smiles I really need the way it makes me feel inside I'm gonna miss the way she smiles I'm gonna miss the things she never had to hide, the good times So many times I tried Tried to reach out To a love that must have died So tender is the pain When you love her And you find your love's in vain Repeat Chorus So many ways she delights me So many ways she excites me But I can't ignore the rain Repeat Chorus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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