Moderators Lee Knight Posted April 8, 2013 Moderators Share Posted April 8, 2013 So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook. V1Holding you tight, swayin' to the rhythm of the bandTonight... you might be my only friendI'm not dancing on my own, I've got you in my handA few more rounds for this old heart to mend C1So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?How I wish it was her I was holdin' tightBut I'm dancin' with the bottle tonightYeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight V2I'm not feelin' any pain, not anything at allBottle, you've done all that you can doYou've washed away my misery, lift'd me from a fallCome mornin', I'll have a different point of view C2So will you be my partner as I glide across the floor?Will you be here waiting... when I come back for more?How I wish it was her I was holdin' tightBut I'm dancin' with the bottle tonightYeah, I'm just dancin' with the bottle tonight BRIDGEYeah, I'm dancing with the bottleSpin me 'round, dip me downDon't drop me on the floorDancing with the bottleWho say I don't need anymore?Uno mas, por favor Or Yeah, I'm dancing with the bottleSpin you 'round, dip you downBut I won't drop you on the floorDancing with the bottle out the door (shades of O's tune^ ^ ^) What you think???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members LCK Posted April 8, 2013 Members Share Posted April 8, 2013 Lee Knight wrote: So, I've been working up this country tune of mine, Dancing with the Bottle Tonight. I think it needs a bridge. Hopefully very simple and reiterating the hook. BRIDGEYeah, I'm dancing with the bottleSpin her 'round, dip her downDon't drop her on the floorDancing till she's empty then Who says I don't need anymore?Uno mas, por favor What you think???? I think it's great. I just made a few suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators Lee Knight Posted April 8, 2013 Author Moderators Share Posted April 8, 2013 YES!!!!!!!! Appropriated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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