Members AmirMaor Posted January 15, 2014 Members Share Posted January 15, 2014 Hi, My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music! I'm here to here your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it. Here is my new song (and clip). hope you like it Lyrics: All she said you and me All she said meant to be All she gave me reason to bealive When she said she will never live Where are you now What are you doing to me Where are you now All she said hold me tiet When we stay up all night All she said trust in me All I have Is what she said to me Where are you now What are you doing to me Where are you now The wind you feel I feel it to The sky you see Is not just for you We are on the same road Don't turn your head away Maybe some day.... Where are you now What are you doing to me Where are you now Tnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members AmirMaor Posted January 16, 2014 Author Members Share Posted January 16, 2014 How many vies and not one comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted January 16, 2014 Moderators Share Posted January 16, 2014 Hi Amir, welcome to the Singer's Forum. If you want some valuable feedback I recommend that you contribute to other people's posts as well, it is the main way to make a forum more active. By commenting other people you will encourage them to give you comments as well. Be sure to check out the forum guidelines just in case. If you specifically want comments and feedback on your song then I would suggest you to post in the songwriting forum section as well. The people there are very knowledgable about songwriting. Anyway, I checked out your song. I think its a great song. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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