Members slubbie Posted April 27, 2013 Members Share Posted April 27, 2013 Fairly new to singing and to this site anyone that could give any pointers? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QlYqJi0C5cg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members ido1957 Posted April 27, 2013 Members Share Posted April 27, 2013 Singing is good. Nothing major needing improvement. Your sideways camera is kind of annoying.You changed keys on the chorus....You should accompany yourself on piano or guitar in the key that you can maintain for the whole song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members slubbie Posted April 28, 2013 Author Members Share Posted April 28, 2013 yeah i know its not the best recorded it with my iphone >i will try and stay on key better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members George95 Posted April 29, 2013 Members Share Posted April 29, 2013 You've got a good voice, but it would have been better if there had been an instrumental base. Great job!The camera was a bit annoying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Lambitious Posted April 30, 2013 Members Share Posted April 30, 2013 The verses are quite good...but try to put more soul in the Chorus. a Like your yelling to your girlfirend "We could've had it ALLLLL you had my heart in your hands...but ya played it, ya played it to the beat" Just with more power I think you need to work on the rythm of the Chorus...but you're really...good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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