Lyrics: Everyone doesn't love rock and roll

"Everyone doesn't love rock and roll"

I dont love her now

and I dont need to say

everything I live for

sooner than later burns away

but theres another, a deep lit soul fire

words that let you breathe

i found a reverbation echoing me

Ive learned that not everyone loves rock and roll

but theres not a sweeter sound to me

so, just let the words pass on right over you

to the next soul who wants to be free

Do you ever dream in color

and see the world in monochrome

the seascape seems so far away

and so small the walls of your room

SO sing the sweet sound

scream your lungs out

this is a hymn to the loudest gods

and they give cause to love

and theyre causing pain

theyre giving me a chance to wake

the rolling sun burning away

What kind of critique do you want? It's a good set of lyrics but there are lines that could use work. (I'm new here, but I write a hell of a lot.) Lyrics are deffinitely my strong suite.

The song reads like a pretty rockn' song. Potential for being a real crowd pleaser I think. Easy to memorise, easy to sing along to. Thats important I think.