New Song "Liberation Day"

Hey Guys,

Please check out a new song I put together...got inspired - wrote it on a Friday, tracked and mixed it on a Sunday. I think it came out pretty good. There are things I'll change when I record it for the new album, but I'm liking it and would love your feedback:

www.myspace.com/robholzer

click on the song: "Liberation Day" (feel free to comment on the other songs as well.

Thanks!!

~r

How ya doin' neighbor. I heard 2/3 of "Liberation Day" MySpace had one of its many errors, you ought to post on Soundclick.com, and it

?t had been a while that anybody included grand piano in the recordings.

? liked the electric guitar too.but there is something wrong.

actually, the intro made me expect something else to come.? kind of got dissapointed.it suddenly sank down.some part of it is due to the synth and the ather part may be the percussions and the vocal melody.

? am not sure but the vocal melody(at least the verse part) reminded me a tune posted a while ago by Bluesway(? guess it was his nickname) .

? liked the intro but it dveloped into something that ? dont like.

Thanks for the comments guys. I consider the track a demo that will be re-recorded - or at least some elements will. Definitely the drums and bass which are currently programmed (Groove Agent and synth bass) - I think this will give it life, plus better vocal performance (these are pretty much one-take scratch vox).

Thanks again for giving a listen and critique.

Best,

~r