Members Roosterhead S. Posted November 11, 2010 Members Share Posted November 11, 2010 This is still a work in progress (just finished this draft this morning, and I still need a bridge), but I was wondering if anyone had any opinions on what I have so far. Musically, it's probably going to be acoustic, with maybe a little phaser on top, in the style of sort of a 60's doo wop or girl group ballad (think "Blue Moon"). Anyway, thanks, opinions are appreciated! Gabrielle I knew you were my death bringer When you colored this colorless soul With lovesick vibrations, the aches and palpitations Reciprocation I never would know The birds The bees Couldn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members grace_slick Posted November 12, 2010 Members Share Posted November 12, 2010 Yikes!!! Interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Roosterhead S. Posted November 12, 2010 Author Members Share Posted November 12, 2010 Thanks! And thanks for reading. I should have audio for it in the next day or two, or at least a rough outline of what I want it to sound like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members grace_slick Posted November 12, 2010 Members Share Posted November 12, 2010 I'd love to hear it. I think it could be really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Roosterhead S. Posted November 13, 2010 Author Members Share Posted November 13, 2010 http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=9872138&q=hi&newref=1 First demo of what I have so far. Lots of editing/arranging to do at the moment. Plus, my drummer is going to put some really awesome harmonies over the whole thing, and come up with a bass or guitar part to put on top. I also edited the lyrics in the first post to the latest draft. Sorry, didn't use a windscreen so there are a few pops, plus a few mis-sung lyrics at the end. Also sorry for the croaking/sad excuse for singing. Again, opinions are appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members grace_slick Posted November 16, 2010 Members Share Posted November 16, 2010 Hmm. First thing - all that reverb makes it SO hard to really HEAR the song!! I'm not sure whether it's added on purposefully or if you were playing in a chamber somewhere. lol I expected the song tune to be more ominous in the chorus, but that's just me. I like the verses tune, it's what I expected I think, somehow. I like this...I'd like to hear it when it's more "done", you know? No reverb!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members apple1 Posted November 17, 2010 Members Share Posted November 17, 2010 ...sounds like a good time!!!! ______________________________married with children dvd box setDesperate Housewives seasons 1-6Queer As Folk DVD Boxset Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members grace_slick Posted November 17, 2010 Members Share Posted November 17, 2010 Get out, spammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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