Members Leon1242 Posted April 17, 2012 Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 I tried something new, lower vocals. I feel like I have improved.. somewhat. the reason I made this was so maybe you guys could tell me if there any improvements happening at all in here. i know the editing is pretty crappy, i have what i have though. crappy gear, anyway; Hoping for the best, lol. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K30M9_l9_E4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators davie Posted April 17, 2012 Moderators Share Posted April 17, 2012 Maybe a bit better. lol Can you try singing it without doing that vocal fry/distortion thing? Some parts sound like you're almost choking.I would practice it in a pure voice and then decide how to style it up. In this piano version I definitely think you need to make your vocals more subtle, maybe sing it more ballad like? But overall good effort! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members shungitstore Posted April 17, 2012 Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 Just try to sing without any of the use of external devices. Then u can judge urself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members urca Posted April 17, 2012 Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 You need more ostinatos in your cadences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted April 17, 2012 Author Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 hmm urca, can you give me an example of what you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members chamcham Posted April 17, 2012 Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 His throat sounds very dry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted April 17, 2012 Author Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 His throat sounds very dry. awe man :/ lol. alright thanks for the feedback guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members b_f_c_99 Posted April 17, 2012 Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 I rather enjoyed it, but man you gotta do something about the mic technique, it sounds like your slamming your face into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Leon1242 Posted April 17, 2012 Author Members Share Posted April 17, 2012 I rather enjoyed it, but man you gotta do something about the mic technique, it sounds like your slamming your face into it. thanks bfc. i know my equipment is on the crappy side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members urca Posted April 18, 2012 Members Share Posted April 18, 2012 hmm urca, can you give me an example of what you mean? Your obbligatos don't seem to resonate in your chest cavities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members BCRich Posted April 18, 2012 Members Share Posted April 18, 2012 I tried something new, lower vocals. I feel like I have improved.. somewhat. the reason I made this was so maybe you guys could tell me if there any improvements happening at all in here. i know the editing is pretty crappy, i have what i have though. crappy gear, anyway; Hoping for the best, lol. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K30M9_l9_E4 I haven't read the other posts yet.... but I'm betting they're saying the same thing. & I mean this in the nicest way possible. Sounds like you're "oversinging" If you're trying to work on something.... maybe I can see it. But if this is "where you want it to be" then you're way oversinging. Your voice sounds nice, your pitch sounds good enough to me. Sing this in your voice, & it would be 100 times better. If this is an emotional song to you, that's going to translate much better doing what you can do & only getting to those outer boundaries of what you can't do on occasion. I can't sing. So what I'm about to say is purely on what my research has led me to believe.... breath. Learn to breathe & you'll be able to get the power & projection you're looking for. Don't force it, breathe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members indytoons Posted April 19, 2012 Members Share Posted April 19, 2012 Awww, Urca, just go with schnerp......the first choice is always the best.... ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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