Spread the Word, Please

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FmTINMALkWM

I put up new video and I was wondering if you guys could check it out? Comments would be helpful also Thanks, if you have any videos that you want me to check out you can put the link here.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ri7YGyn4C3Q

Comments/feedback?

first off, chill out. you seem super nervous. like, SUPER nervous.

Haha yeah, i'll try to relax a little more, thanks for the advice!

First, you sound fine, and I do believe you have great potential as a singer. And I understand that you're young and anxious for feedback. But if you want people to comment on your video you should first get into the forum and post some comments on other people's recordings, participate in some discussions, etc. It's a bit grating when people with a handful of posts (4 out of your 5 posts occur in this thread) keep bumping a thread to get feedback. Give and you shall receive.

But, again, you have a fine voice that will only get better as you work through material and perhaps take lessons.

Some pitch issues at 1:35 or so.

That breathy tone is going to waste a lot of air.

Otherwise nice.