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Ike Laumbrok

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    Your words melody and phrasing support the solid but simple chord progression you've chosen.To me it feels like your song could benefit from adding a hook or chorus that has a different but complementary feel. Maybe a slightly different rhythm or use of phrasing along with a change in melody that surprises the listener. You've got a solid foundation to work from. Keep up the good work
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