Members MrJoshua Posted November 11, 2005 Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 I've been screwing around with the chord changes on the verse for at least a year, and never could figure out anything to do with it. Something clicked today, though, so enjoy. The bass is obnoxiously loud because it's a rough mix (and because the almighty Lug likes it that way, and I'm all about keeping Lug happy, because a happy Lug doesn't post MP3s). Enjoy! Better Off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MrJoshua Posted November 11, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 Feel free to contribute feedback, comments, complaints, whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Gruven Posted November 11, 2005 Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 I like the music. but the vocal isn't my cup o' tee. Sorry... I'm mean, I know. Don't hit me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members willsellout Posted November 11, 2005 Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 I think the vocals have the possibility to be good in a Curt Cobain kind of way, but there are a lot of off keys? I dig the music very much and the bass sounds really good. Nice groove. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MrJoshua Posted November 11, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 Yeah, the vocals are kind of rough. It'll be better after I get our singer to do it instead of me. That's the problem with writing songs. I can't always actually pull off what's supposed to go into the song. Thanks for the feedback, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MrJoshua Posted November 11, 2005 Author Members Share Posted November 11, 2005 Up once and then I'll let it die the slow, painful death it deserves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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