Members MrJoshua Posted January 15, 2006 Members Share Posted January 15, 2006 It's......a new MP3! I know you're all excited. Don't try to deny it. And here it is!Drown Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ace Of Bass Posted January 15, 2006 Members Share Posted January 15, 2006 I like the bassline a lot. the clean lead guitar, especially at the end, needs to be punchier, and perhaps a tiny bit more in time. the drummer is a little boring, but it's okay. the vocals range from okay to boarderline painful. uh...just in case you were asking for criticism... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MrJoshua Posted January 15, 2006 Author Members Share Posted January 15, 2006 lol, the criticism is ok. I mainly record these as a way to get the idea across to the rest of the band. I already knew my drumming and singing were substandard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ace Of Bass Posted January 15, 2006 Members Share Posted January 15, 2006 Originally posted by MrJoshua lol, the criticism is ok. I mainly record these as a way to get the idea across to the rest of the band. I already knew my drumming and singing were substandard. Oh, did you play all the instruments by yourself? didn't realize.well, props to you for doing that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jazz Ad Posted January 15, 2006 Members Share Posted January 15, 2006 Majesty was much funnier. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members MrJoshua Posted January 16, 2006 Author Members Share Posted January 16, 2006 Originally posted by Jazz Ad Majesty was much funnier. I have to agree with that, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jazz Ad Posted January 16, 2006 Members Share Posted January 16, 2006 Otherwise, the song is good, instruments are ok but you really need to do something about that voice of yours. You pulse way too high. It's under your palate while it should be down your throat. You want to breath from the belly, not the lungs. Your shoulders shouldn't move while you take air. This way you'd have much more power, it wouldn't be edgy with tune and you'd kill the dreadful resonance from your nose. It may make you lose range at first but once you're used to it it comes back very quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ace Of Bass Posted January 16, 2006 Members Share Posted January 16, 2006 Originally posted by Jazz Ad Otherwise, the song is good, instruments are ok but you really need to do something about that voice of yours.You pulse way too high. It's under your palate while it should be down your throat.You want to breath from the belly, not the lungs. Your shoulders shouldn't move while you take air.This way you'd have much more power, it wouldn't be edgy with tune and you'd kill the dreadful resonance from your nose.It may make you lose range at first but once you're used to it it comes back very quickly. Pheww....I was starting to feel really bad about my comments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Jazz Ad Posted January 16, 2006 Members Share Posted January 16, 2006 He asked for criticism didn't he ?We'll lick each other's balls another day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Ace Of Bass Posted January 16, 2006 Members Share Posted January 16, 2006 Originally posted by Jazz Ad He asked for criticism didn't he ? We'll lick each other's balls another day. Nah, he just annouced he recorded a new song. i didn't realized this wasn't a "what do you think of it" thread until after i posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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